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10-11-04, 10:54 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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"The World We Live In" Collab, Abstrakt, Xclusive, B.I.Detained
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…The World We Live In… -Abstrakt- This world’s in-cascade we got the wrong being-overpaid Teachers and nurses under-paid, disrespect being displayed We got small girls unaware how the STi’s trade Till the moment she's raped and diagnosed with aids Racisms never going, murders happen with no-one knowing Each civilian chooses his own path there’s no-one showing White brown or black we should have each others back One way to avoid growth is by the wearing cover-sacks A population were nothing but violence is filling-the-air We got kids with guns in there pants conceiling-em-there The innocent are being punished the guilty are running- free Police sending me into a delusion as if they stun gunning-me Hook The world we live in is slowly erupting in our face Like terrorism's invisible it's been constructed without a trace When the two towers fell we was reminded of sin There’s no excuses to hand out it's the world we live in The world we live in is slowly erupting in our face Like terrorism's invisible it's been constructed without a trace When the two towers fell we was reminded of sin There’s no excuses to hand out it's the world we live in …Xclusive… The world we live in is full of desire to hit something beyond the best… People just force shit to happen, so they can win this contest… Some people stand outside the city’s building’s and protest… About stupid things why dos it happen like that cause there obsessed?… When shit breaks on the block then guns break into a war… Then war breaks out into a battle and a lot much more… Most people all they see when they walk down the hood… Is people with guns and on drugs, now I hope I aint misunderstood… This worlds full of hate even I have hate when I say it… People get pulled over by the cops and then they ask for a permit… Its stupid to hear that the people don’t take care of the pollution… In the olden days people usto get the mad chills and execution… To many people killing each other one day there will be no population… At least theres people not afraid to stand up and give a blood donation… Down the way maybe you’ll get shot, rollin with no permission… To many people thinking war and government is good for there tradition… People yellin at each other sayin nasty words, witch makes racism… Children being born everyday and half haven’t been threw baptism… Half the worlds population hasn’t even been threw school to learn addition… Then they turn into hardcore thugs with guns and need money for ammunition… Hook: The world we live in is slowly erupting in our face Like terrorism's invisible it's been constructed without a trace When the two towers fell we was reminded of sin There’s no excuses to hand out it's the world we live in The world we live in is slowly erupting in our face Like terrorism's invisible it's been constructed without a trace When the two towers fell we was reminded of sin There’s no excuses to hand out it's the world we live in B.I.Detained You wanna know about the world we live in? & breathe in? Where there's intricate attrocities without no fucking reason Each season brings yet more doubt, asking what life's about, Around 'n' around the people shout to open their feeble mouth. Because our fears let out.. I tell you a story that shook my life Its a small sadening story involving my brother & his wife. This could never have been right, they had a baby on the way, I was gonna be an uncle & I was looking forward to the day.. That I could play with niece or nephew holding them till.. They were laughing with adoration just from this family thrill. But this wasn't to be, nor a family.. Bro calls me on the phone "Dean are you at home? Laurens lost the babies.. I'm all alone" My head goes dead, my bro's in tears.. I get the lust for beer See I ain't ever heard my bro' sob in all of 18 fucking years I didn't really wanna hear what he said.. but I took it all in Drowning thoughts of sorrow that didn't have chance to swim So that a part of my day to day life.. heart ache & all that shit & if this is the World we livin' in.. all I can say is fuck it. |
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10-12-04, 12:01 AM
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Houdini
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U used my "Title"
"The World We Live In" And cant even gimme prop's, Name bitin motherfuckers damn...... Other then that shit Uppin, Heres a link 2 my ORIGINAL THE WORLD WE LIVE IN http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149989 As u can see it was BIT' heh No sweat tho peep's No beef....Just a little credit and props...... Other than that it was nice, I liked it. I give it a 7.5 outta 10 Uppin
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10-12-04, 12:02 AM
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Mona Lisa.
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IP:
Not leaving feedback was a bad thing.
Expect an OM on you punk.. :-)
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10-12-04, 01:30 AM
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SEE YA AT THE TOP
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IP:
nice nice, good concepts on the world yall
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10-12-04, 04:19 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
yea it was pretty good....but yall needed to get me an poet on this shit......other than that yea twas good....
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10-12-04, 06:19 AM
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Light Weight
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IP:
diz wuz tite i likd it
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10-12-04, 11:08 AM
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#7
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†•The Council Nigga •†
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IP:
Yo We Should All Do Another Collab Wit Poet And Apocalypse But Uppin For More Feedback |
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10-12-04, 12:47 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP:
yo that was real nice i liked it alot had good wordplay and every thing i loved it
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10-12-04, 01:05 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
aight ya ill do some petry shit with virtue and poet...lets do it up i always liked htere shit...and ya who cares if we copyied your ittle ares vers eis better...
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10-12-04, 03:01 PM
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#10
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†•The Council Nigga •†
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IP:
Yea Yo I Changed My Name Ta This From -AbStRaKt- I Wanan Do Like A Tight Ass Topic
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10-12-04, 03:07 PM
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Thank You, Come Again
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IP:
nice nice...............pretty good overall
abstrakt we should collab this weekend gimme feedback on my new open mic...
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10-12-04, 05:52 PM
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†•The Council Nigga •†
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Aight BigChase Get At Me On AIM pimpedoutmc56 |
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10-13-04, 07:35 PM
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#13
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
uppin for more feedback...
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10-15-04, 11:24 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
uppin coem on lol...
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10-17-04, 06:07 PM
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#15
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
uppin for more feedback yall...
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