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10-13-04, 10:22 PM
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Hip Hop FX (collab feat Nova and FluidMoon)
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:WillNova:
Nova towards Undaground Railroad makin miracles// My ancestors sendin messages singin blue spirituals// Gospel hymnals wit the low baritone// Poems lyrical, requiems gently soothes the burial// Research the material; gain knowledge thas factual// Episcopalian church, became attracted to classical// Mind more tactical, obtainin literacy in music// Innovate sum acoustics, and put a poem to it// Wise and prudent continued to excel in writin// Mind enlightened, melodic tones break the silence// Advanced and heightened, brain open and eclectic// Fluid moon and Nova change the game like antiseptics// :FluidMoon: We pop and lock, like breakdancers turn tables Flippin shit, slip and dipping it, feeling sick, am kickin it Like hip hop did, pavin roads for youth, like city steps True calling,musically we're merkin kids, beyond limits speakin rhymes,bringing to life, serving purpose, even changes in the seasons can't turn us, feelin bliss cus i got nas and jay z,i'm bumpin it,as i think of this lookin ahead, i'm lovin it,coherent brains get lifted we're all gifted, trully god has sifted, workin overtime raise a rhyme to make a dime, ya just in time, get in enjoy the ride,step inside of the mind,of a physicist changin shit, molecular make ups and breakin wits hip hop's the one and only nature matching wits astonishable hits, nonstoppable beats,packin heat just breakin off a piece of some old school technique..
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10-13-04, 11:26 PM
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Puttin MD On The Map
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IP:
siiiiiiiiick this was off the hook styles i loved the old skewl feel and flow i was feeling this all throughout and multi's were killin it even more tight shit pplz both had real blazing verses...i liked willnova's more but theyr both sick keep it up and plz post some feedback in my open mics
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10-13-04, 11:36 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP:
thank you,,,uppin, this was a qucik keystyle.......leave the negative shit at the door, damn, i just noticed i used the word wits,twice,,oh well,.....a little flavor...lol
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10-19-04, 05:44 PM
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IP:
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Keep up the good work. |
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10-19-04, 06:40 PM
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Banned: Avoiding Blacklist
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IP:
not bad...coulda been better
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10-19-04, 07:29 PM
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IP:
collabz should be real dope and this was a good piece but needz more wordplay.
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10-22-04, 04:45 PM
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IP:
hahahah, thanx fo the feedback... but I ain't no femcee. I'mma straight up nigga
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