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Old 10-15-04, 03:09 PM   #1
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Quik 1 hour to write n spit street style spit...might turn into proper track or collab...

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Old 10-16-04, 06:10 AM   #2
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Old 10-16-04, 11:31 AM   #3
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Thats the beat DZK used for "Dont FUck with me"... -_-... DZK is awsome ..

i was surprised, a lil ruff on the quality side, but still a nice lil verse.. i saw soem multies in there.. was feelin em.. good shit.. -1
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Old 10-16-04, 11:56 AM   #4
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yeh my quality ain't great dawg need to sort that but only a quik verse so didnt bother editing...appreciate feedback...

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Old 10-16-04, 11:57 AM   #5
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oh n yeh DZK is awesome....................

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Old 10-16-04, 03:29 PM   #6
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Aiyo...Your Voice Is Decent Got That Thugish Tone To It. The Flow Was Pretty Decent and The Vocabulary Is Higher Than Average. Keep Ya Shit UP...Decent Track.
If You Want I Will Mos Def Collab With You On This Song and That Song of Yours Called "Chrit Diss" Cause I Could DIss Him For Ages.

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Old 10-17-04, 06:24 AM   #7
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word dawg pm me n we'll sort it out.....

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Old 10-17-04, 10:03 PM   #8
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iigh heres wasup

the beat is hot and the lyrics are pretty hot u got a good voice but i think u culd have made your flow a little better
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Old 10-18-04, 12:06 PM   #9
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word^^^thanx.......

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Old 10-18-04, 03:09 PM   #10
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dunno this DZK. but that was originally a rockitproductions beat.

Premmy...
Wasn't feelin it....

put sum more emotion.....quality wasn't as bad as everyone is sayin.
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Old 10-18-04, 04:03 PM   #11
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word dawg ya know keep hour spit n shit but yeh i can take critism...

we battlin soon dawg.....????
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