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Check in by: 10-21-04 at 03:03 PM

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Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 03:04 PM.

B.I.Detained has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 03:07 PM.

continuous topicals on life and war leaving me with a sore~head...
brix the only thing u spittin is puss from them spots on ya fore-head...
numerous open mics but all they demonstrate is ya style transparent...
predictable bitch who's spits prove that no talent is apparent...
got r country in common…net alias not only thing getting a bad name…
ya girls gud looking so it’s a shame…
…….that wen she pleasures u wiv them hands she must cause u pain…
walkin onto rv…pants down by ya legs and ready to ‘commune’…
bitch u think u amune….u should’ve been shot in ya mum’s womb…
realise I will break u, after this I’ll have glass to communicate through…
I’ll hit you with so many punches ya eyes will not continuate ‘blue’…


His pic thread –
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=154684

1st bar = check his first pic
3rd bar = *gives country = bad name, b.i.detained = bad name
*check ‘polly’ in his pic link n look at her hands
4th bar = crew
5th bar = check pic, blue eyes > black eyes

uppin ur verse

Voted For: Premanition

Here's a straight up personal.. bitch you better believe me
That only a faggot bites my lyrics off a site like RB.
^^^^^^naaa, weak intro, 3/10
& don't deny it son.. I'll even provide links & shit
dw saw the window of oppurtunity.. but I smashed him thru it.
^^^mmm, better, 6/10
So what if I flipped an old concept?.. bitch & complain
Your punches hit hard & last..as much as erections in the rain.
^^^^^erections last long in the rain, (well they do for me, hehe) 3/10
This kids wack as hell.. shows to be the ultimate definition
But dw's future is bright.. < there goes a sarcastic premanition
^^^^^lol nice pnch, 9/10
From the Uk right?.. Shit I'm acting like I care.
Coz now I know.. I'm ashamed to fucking live there.
^^^^na, weak closer, 3/10

that premanition punc saved you, good flo but punches need working on! total, 24/50

continuous topicals on life and war leaving me with a sore~head...
brix the only thing u spittin is puss from them spots on ya fore-head...
^^^^mmm, 50/50 intro, not bad, 4/10
numerous open mics but all they demonstrate is ya style transparent...
predictable bitch who's spits prove that no talent is apparent...
^^^^^lol, nice, 6/10
got r country in common…net alias not only thing getting a bad name…ya girls gud looking so it’s a shame…
that wen she pleasures u wiv them hands she must cause u pain…
^^^^^naaaa, dont like it, 3/10
walkin onto rv…pants down by ya legs and ready to ‘commune’…
bitch u think u amune….u should’ve been shot in ya mum’s womb…
^^^^nice punch, 6/10
realise I will break u, after this I’ll have glass to communicate through…
I’ll hit you with so many punches ya eyes will not continuate ‘blue’…
^^^^nice clooser, 6/10

nice verse they by preminition, good punches mate but you need to work on your flow! total, 25/50

vote goes to preminition, better flow, punches were more consitantly good.

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Mystic-Rogue vs Plutonium
Mystic-Rogue vs Lil Bitz

pssss, yo preminition, i like your still, if you want you can come and try out for dopeness defined, pm me k

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Mystic-Rogue vs Plutonium
Mystic-Rogue vs Lil Bitz

thanx for the vote but thought u were very harsh on both verses handy out the 3 out of tens???

oh n no im down wiv definition....

uppin this....

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Voted For: Premanition

aiight

imma break it down like this

Flow: B.I detained had the better flow...premanition your shit was almost stretched.......it was decent shit though...but i gave flow to B I detained

structure: B.I Detained had better structure premanition your shit was kinda stretched..so igave structure to bi

punches:i gave punches to premanition his shit hit harder....BI ur shit was ok u had good structure but then wen it came down to it the punches werent even that hard...so punches i gave to premanition

personals: premanition gets this cuz his shit hit harder and i like the pic shit....matter fact i dont even think b i used a personal

vocab: premanition got that one fo sho...he had decent vocab...b i was all basic....so prem gets my vote for that

return da fav
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155760

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he did use a personal but it was from way back.....^^^

peace

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lol..can someone who knows how to battle vote on this?

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aight sweet as, just asking man, if you change your mind, come join

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Mystic-Rogue vs Plutonium
Mystic-Rogue vs Lil Bitz

Voted For: B.I.Detained

Both were pretty much god.. but prem came with streched lines..and..
BI: ya shit was good.. not the best but nice overall.. you had some punches that were strong... it was good but some lines were just dumb....like the second to the last bar... i didnt like it.....you had some nice personals...then opening was not as good... and the closing was not as good either......

Prem: nice overall but yours was streched up a lil bit..... and i ddint like the rhymes cheme... not that good... opening was horrible in my thoughs but you came good in the midle and end....nice personals you got that.... but the punches retty much not as good....

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

RTF is my open mic...... BI you needa drop feedback....

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!