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Girl Problems

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^Lucifer^ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 09:27 PM.

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There was this girl from my school.. she was loved and had the most beautiful face..
She was the love of my life.. every time i would talk to her my heart would race..
seeing this women would brighten my day up.. I'd be as high as the ceilings..
She was such a wonderful girl i was always afraid to tell her my true feelings..
so one day... i decided it was time.. so i took a deep breath.. and my heart began to pound..
I asked her out... but to no avail i was rejected.. her heart had already been found..
Her True love was my best friend..but we promised.. because of girls we never fought..
But how could this be she was the one.. i began plotting evil thoughts..
my head is spinning.. i dont realize whats goin on.. how can this be...
he was my best friend.. stole my girl how on earth could he ever do this to me..
Im fed up with it.. nobody understands me life isnt even worth living so why try..
i cant believe anything anymore... im living with insecurities my whole live is a lie...
"Girls Just Cause Problems" i should have listened to what i was told..
But this one was caring and beautiful how could her heart be this cold..
in my head.. depression enters my thoughts... laying at night on my bed..
im done why try... nobody cares about me i might as well be dead..
this girl meant alot to me.. backstabbed me for my best friend now i take my life..
she was amazing.. one of those ones u look at and say she could be my wife..
so now i sit in my room... contemplating suicide.. all the pain inside bubbles...
as i put the revolver in my throat.. and take my life.. all because of


GIRL TROUBLEs....