This guyz Hilarious He's A Big Joke
He Grab The Mic Like A Dick And All He did Was choke
I Bet Your Broke.Youa Bumbed A basehead sprung off the Coke
I on The other hand am way Much Betta
Makes Mo chedda And and strap Down Wit Barettaz
You Takin Good care a bitchez Thats Why You Got Feathers
But Hey This Is A Topic And Your the Subject
You Got on my Shitlist And became a national Reject
Im A King Cant U C I Demand respect
Or Else you Can taste Da LEad From da Tech
You Dumbass Rookie Rappin Bout Horror
You wanted the Full Battle But U Only Can Hang one quater
U Know If I Killed u Id leav Ya Body Undawater
Wit And Adidas Wind suit Sporter
Hey Im Sick Of Minglers tryna Get A Peace of My Throne
Keep ya Lip Goin And There Goes A Piece of Ya dome
Mouth Full Of Ice So i Sleep With The Chrome
It was all Fun NGames Till I Left My Mark N Yo happy Home
Hey After This Battle U Will No Longer Remain
Ill Riase Like Thriller And Make My Bullets Fall like Rain
Ayo I Ripz Casketz of My Enemies Bcuz I Cant let Go A Grudge
You Try to knock me off my game but i wont budge
You dont think That This is Fair Tell It To The Judge
id Box You You out But Ima Pro Stud
Yall Internet Nerdz Claimin Title Like Roy Jones
But Im Glenn Johnson Cept i Brake Bones
Yall Get mad bcuz I Brake Up Happy Homez
Im Bringin da Heat Bac on Another Level Like Biggy & Puffy combs
or Shall I Say P.diddy but Witout Da MAse
Yall Want A Welcome Committee But Allz Ya Get Iz A Busted FAce
Send YA to the church So You Can Pray 4 Amazing Grace
You Like The Speed of The Flow but im Bout To Slow Yo Paste
Solve Ya CAse like im A Spy on The Chase
Im tired Of These I~WANT~TO~BE~GANGASTA niggas
If Ya Wanna Be Rich Id send ya To da Bank for Figures
Black or White or even if yo Ass is Blue or Pink i Kill Like al capone
Heres Ya Career >
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........ now Damn Its Gone.

This Is two Of My Open Micz Put Together These Are The onez wit No feedback But N E Wayz Im Lookin 4A Battle Against Any Newb Or Pro It Dont Matter Im jus Lookin 4 a Battle so When Yall Wanna Battle Jus Hit Me Up ASAP (PM Me)

you see this?
this is called feedback okay....................
it was nice, nice wordplay an puns, ya not new too battlin on sites huh?
structure was aight too...
pretty decent drop, puff combs line was kinda nice...
7/10

now.....
leave FEEDBACK, an not callin people out on my hip hop quotables
thanx

peace

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Thanx Mayne I Replied To Yourz

Uppin 4 feed Yall I Need Feed

this was not bad, flow was there, wordplay are alrite, need harder punches tho rating it a 3.3/5 keep droppin

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'i lose battles on purpose just so rappers can dream more' - LL
Bored so im Rapping on the internet Just for Spite....
Rhyme dictionary rappers please battle me with your writerns