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Old 10-22-04, 06:24 AM   #1
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Keep Movin

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As we keep movin the street keeps killin
to many sinnin drug dillin killin fuckin millions
How can we stop this act when people get trapped
sliced by a jab in the back bitches gettin smaked
As we go round this vicious circle wid dis herdle
of obsticles that get in da way only creates murder
poloticions talkin jack all just makin these stupid rules
to only impress fools that piss me off like im ignited fules
i'm a fuckin gangsta tryin to give ya punks a life distater
trying to rip ya trash ya b4 you'll do it i'll do it faster!
you'll be da laughter the clown that is brought down
you an't worth shit not a pound only bein dead and found
Cause im evil im i'll enough to burn ya alive people
shoot ya brain out theres never gonna be anyone deceitful
cause im sinner and fools you don't wanna think im no biginner
when i'm done through my verse it's da energy thats makin ya thinner
fuck you i'll eat ya for dinner i'm known to create earth quakes
and make other mc's breake flak away and dissapear wid out a trace
I carry gats bigger den twenty hands destroy 170 bands
get capped and make you look stupid till you can't stand
make you do hand stands when I'm rapping you punk
you'll be put in a trunk and left rotted den later smell like a skunk
You can't stop me my words are to lethal they bring heat
chop ya feet off and put ya in a dark sleep I flow 2 da beat
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Old 10-22-04, 06:25 AM   #2
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diz wuz better den dat other peice 6/10 keep em coming
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Old 10-22-04, 09:28 AM   #3
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that was aight wit the flow ur gettin better managed to maintain a flow on that yea i'd say 6/10 u need to up them rhymes but the rhyming at present is getting better from ya
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Old 10-22-04, 10:10 AM   #4
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it was aight sinner
yoo many forced rhymes...
ya tired multies, ut ya forcin them in there just so u can say its a multie, an it taks the sting out of the lines an stuff.....

try workin on not as mant forced rhymes, an like i told u before, mutlies aint important unless u can use them correctly
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