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Kwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 01:19 PM.

Main has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 01:30 PM.

Dawg, ya real wack, you've got nothin but horribly filled raps
who gave u an A? i'ma take it away, cuz thaz where ya skill's at
the absolute 'min'imum--structure's weak too, so ya flow's strange
i'ma kick u in the hindquarters, till u start ta' feel shortchanged
this whore's lame, he's got pure wackness draped over 'im
the only time ya rhymes wont be played,
........................................is if someone taped over 'em
So u dreamin of bein sick? well i've got some shady actions
i'll drop links to my ill battles, leave your skin widda chain reaction
i'll push the back of ya head to ya ankles, till ya back is broke
--so i dont necessarily gotta be Chris Rock ta' crack a joke...

blah....10 keyed...i hope u voters pay attention to the wordplay...

shorty im mimicked .. you think your styles wanted
im pasture skills to the point i could graze cows on it
must not see straight, or your rhymes ran outta luck
the way your all cockeyed its like your lookin to suck
your rhymes are broke n my golden styles way richer
lmfao if your lyrics had a price .. it'd begin with fisher
since birth u been a mystery, ever since first mention
the doc said 'its a boy' .. but in the form of a quesion
seriously though where'd you get that nonsense text
if i took aleaf outta ur book ud have no concepts left

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Voted For: Kwell

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your rhymes are broke n my golden styles way richer
lmfao if your lyrics had a price .. it'd begin with fisher
^^Nice line. One of a few good ones. Not bad, flows a bit off, sumshit was played. I liked the doctor line but it lacked wordplay n multies. 6/10

i'll push the back of ya head to ya ankles, till ya back is broke
--so i dont necessarily gotta be Chris Rock ta' crack a joke...
^^Best closer I've heard in a while. Tape line was ill, some of th eother shit was ok bu not too connected, some good wordplay and nice flow. 7/10

Nice battle ya'll i liked it a lot.

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Voted For: Kwell

aight, aight...
kwell got this
i loved that...
the absolute 'min'imum--structure's weak too, so ya flow's strange
i'ma kick u in the hindquarters, till u start ta' feel shortchanged
^^^ line

2 flaws tho kwell...
ya finisher came weak..
an the chain reaction line seemed a lil forced
but other then that ya wordplay n personals got u the win in my opinnon.....

main, ya flow was too plain n simple, there was no creativity in the wordplay
that has cost u the battle in my opinnon....

so kwell gets my vote, could yall return the fave in my sig?
thanx

peace

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uppin this shit for some more votes...............

Voted For: Main

damn

IP:


shorty im mimicked .. you think your styles wanted
im pasture skills to the point i could graze cows on it

^lmao damn better then anything he spit

kwell was nice to but i think u got a bit of a beat down here

flow-main syllable count was near perfect good flow
kwell good as well commas didnt help ya flow much though

punchs- main again not by much though both had tight punchs

wordplay-cant decide gotta be a tie to me nice shit on both sides

personals-neither

creativitie-hmmm kwell i think got this area both had nice shit

overall close battle i think but main did the better verse kwell had a some lines that were pretty soft as for main kept up with nice punchs

good battle

Voted For: Main

Kwell
this whore's lame, he's got pure wackness draped over 'im
the only time ya rhymes wont be played,
........................................is if someone taped over 'em
i'll push the back of ya head to ya ankles, till ya back is broke
--so i dont necessarily gotta be Chris Rock ta' crack a joke...

I liked those, the taped over was a nice concept. . and the crack a joke wa good. . .

Main
shorty im mimicked .. you think your styles wanted
im pasture skills to the point i could graze cows on it
must not see straight, or your rhymes ran outta luck
the way your all cockeyed its like your lookin to suck
since birth u been a mystery, ever since first mention
the doc said 'its a boy' .. but in the form of a quesion

LMAO. . .nice, witty punches hit hard. . .good verse. ..wordplay was nice... .

v/main for a better verse with good wordplay, harder punches, and consistency.

Return the favor plz. . .link is in the sig

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aight...uppin for some more honest votes..........

upping for some more votes plzzzz.
leave a link and the favour will be returned

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