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Old 10-23-04, 01:19 PM   #1
Dirty Nigga
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sinner, sinner, sinner *shake my damn head*..its over before it begun

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lmfaooooo!!!
he goes from mad dog, then onto me....
this faggots best keepin it shush, his mouth writin cheques his whack rhymes cant cash...............
lets do this sinner....
okay, okay
ch-ch-check...
lets go!....

has anybody ''seen-a-bitch''?..
ya must be ''mad, dog'' trynna fuck with this...
before ya got murderd in audio you was on my dick...
''please shotta help me, your rhymes are so sick''...
now this fuckin prick wanna act like he dont need advice..
''help me with multies''......
...............why? even if u had one man band ghost write, you'd still never be nice...
i done told you, before u type think twice....
cause i'll come back n crush the shit out ya whackness like a fuckin vice...
i aint obie trice, but shits hittin the fan....
an by that i mean, your hooked on my lines n cryin for the dopeman....
eminem on the brain, who the fuck are u? stan? faggot please...
i'd stomp the shit out u myself...but it'd be more fun to throw you in a mosh pit full of nazis!..
your a fuckin joke, a herb, when u rhyme, we all sit n laugh...
i'm finna get in that ass for crossin my path...
an ya beggin me, like ''yo i was jokin, u dont need to do that''
fuckin pussy, stay off my dick, cause when i'm thru, theres no tellin where you'll be left at...
this fat bitch got the nerve to call me ugly...
lemme tell ya kid, if u had a girl, she'd do more than just hug-me..
my rhymes are lovely, an your whackness defined....
one of a kind.....
there aint nobody like you...
but that aint a good thing, so hit the ''x' n leave the site...
we'd be glad to see the back of you.....ay mad dog, aint that right?
people are tired of droppin disses to someone who cant retaliate...
well u do come back, but softer then a lightweight.....
an hell, i'm takin this easy, i could really fuck you up......
rearrange ya facial feature like i work on the set of ''nip tuck''...
so next time u tell me whasup, just remember.....
cause when ya get sonned, everybody gonna celebrate like its the fuckin 25th of december..........
..............mother'fucker!!!!

aight sinner, i took it easy on u, i could use alot more shit against you, an u know this
so keep my fuckin name outta your mouth, aight?
..............that is all...............
i'm out
u want some real beef n real rhymes huh?
holla motherfucker, you know where i'm ay

peace!
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Old 10-23-04, 01:54 PM   #2
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o an the things where i'm quotin him are all true
just for the record
upppin for feed
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Old 10-23-04, 02:01 PM   #3
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Bit long but blah it was worth it some of your lines were short and then followed up wit a stretched Line but you had good disses and the structure was just it was hard to read But Overall this was a Aight OM
6/10 Keep it up..
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Old 10-23-04, 02:05 PM   #4
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ayo Made the bitch mad fuck im so glad
Wish ya fuckin ass was beheaded in bagdad
He can't take me my force is to strong ya wrong
whats drugs are u on ya ur rapping wearing a thong
your an emcee who can't see me so flee please
u an't no rapper ya should be on bbc on da tweenies
Please jesus your never beat me thats leagally
you'll be stomped shot repeatedly in ya own ally
Mutha fucker when......... ya on a mic u stutter
i'll be ripping ya already all i heard b4 was mutter
u fuckin midgit ya an't a paid rapper bitch I invade
I take every penny u saved till ya die in ya grave
I blow up in ya face like a granade till I see ya brain
and judging by the size of it, it wasn't even a grain
Bitch your damn rite there no one a rapper of my kind
least I know ya an't blind but ya disses should all rewind
Cause there to boring on my bord u an't even scoring
you take every rhyme outta ya book and can't stop adoring
so when you fire disses at me beware about ya mrs
i'll stick her clit on my dick when I find her on chrismas
you an easy bitch to finish cause thats me im sinner
and i an't no beginer so fuck u bitch I stick up da finger
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Old 10-23-04, 02:06 PM   #5
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thanx, thanx
you'd prolly be feelin it more if u was aware who sinner is, what he does, an the opener too.........
but i appreciate the feed, thanx homeboy

it is kinda long, but all is good, i wrote it in like 10 minutes lol
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Old 10-23-04, 02:08 PM   #6
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lmaoooooo sinner
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Old 10-24-04, 06:51 AM   #7
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uppin for feed..........
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Old 10-24-04, 09:38 AM   #8
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Ya structure was stretched like a fat bitch...
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Old 10-25-04, 12:01 PM   #9
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uppin for feed yall!!!!!
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Old 10-26-04, 06:04 AM   #10
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Dopeman-- ill shit!, touched home a little bit. Sinner-or whatevr the other dudes name was good competition. Hands down you win with an edge of 2/3 Keep cuttin people down man you have a knack for that
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Old 10-26-04, 03:22 PM   #11
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feed is appreciated chew
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