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10-23-04, 03:42 PM
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You Love My Style.
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Greed & Envy- DV and R Rated (Finished Product)
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/keyroguemusic.htm Aight the collab is done just finished it. peep and enjoy. First up- Rated 2nd- Me aka DV 
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10-23-04, 03:55 PM
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Out-Spoken
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IP:
this was amazing...beat was fuckin dope...lyrics were fuckin dope...yall for some reason..had a more appealing delivery style...and the only thing i have felt that you two have struglled with as far as audio..is riding the beat..and you both did it flawlessly this time...i'm puttin this on my mp3 player..lol...great fuckin job...
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We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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10-23-04, 04:10 PM
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~Whos Next?~
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IP:
the beat is off tha hook! gotta love it. i dont know if you know who the kotton mouth kings are, theyre on phsycopathic records (ICPs label) you sould a lot like them... good sound
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10-23-04, 05:41 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
this is the first time i heard R rated he came hot...lots of energy he was hot....but DV came super Hot compraid to r rated...
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10-24-04, 02:37 AM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP:
This Is Not Finished I Am Doing The Third Verse Tomorrow...
So This Will Be Updated With The Final Version Prolly Tomorrow or Sumtime In The Week... Thanks For The Feedback. ~R~ |
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10-24-04, 04:17 PM
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You Love My Style.
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IP:
OOh Word?
..lol i wanna peep it
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10-25-04, 12:41 AM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP:
This was pretty good- Best I've heard from R, and Deadly sounded like me... blah
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10-25-04, 06:36 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP:
This track coulda been so much better......first off R-rated what are u doing man?.....your flow lacks smooveness...instead of flowing to the beat..you force ya flow on the beat...shit sounded wack.....u completely ignored the snares...your lines were coming up short an u were constantly pausing in a untimely manner...u sped up on some lines to make it fit instead of writing it to flow...your flow killed any chance of ya verse being impressive...u got alot of elevating to do.....deadly...ya verse was somewhat better....your production hurt u alot....your vocals were way to loud....an your dubs were WAY TOO LOUD...an the highlighted words like the certain words u yelled didn't seem to be approiate for this beat to me.....your flow was decent but u were stumbling on some words...this woulda been alot tighter with a chorus as well so I'll give this a.....5/10 cuz both of you coulda done much better.
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10-25-04, 11:58 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP:
hmm, lmao@ deadly biting seven's style,,man,you tried to sound just like him...,,but yo,this shit was hot anyway, you both did well flow wise and the beat is so gangsta..pc
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