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Triple_N 5 100.00%
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Old 10-24-04, 12:49 AM   #1
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Old 10-24-04, 01:00 AM   #2
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Old 10-24-04, 01:05 AM   #3
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Old 10-26-04, 09:01 PM   #4
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Ah'ight son here's my spit...............Good luck to ya


You are the apparent spokesman for all net-thugs and I despise your sight
Cuz Only way u bust slugs is not watchin' ya step in moist folliage at night
U try tirelessly to give off this thoruoghbred thug pimp persona in ya rhymes
When only time u "clockin' hose" is trying to beat your previous lawn time
I spent 15 minutes peepin' ya tracks & your alicia keys parody was booty
Now....I want my "quarterback" to "audible" his "plays" into silent movies
You wack, and I'm a make u "see the light" like albinos lookin' in the mirror
Punches quake gon "shake dat shit" like dance lessons by a showerless shakira
So don't waste time & money droppin a CD...seriously dawg whats the use?
Cuz it wouldn't be rotational by itself playing a game of duck, duck goose
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Old 10-26-04, 09:07 PM   #5
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It's a Known Fact Clowns Like This Will 'Never Be Nice'
I Spit In All Angles Quick ... So I Should Of Been Named A 'Veteran Twice'
My Rhymes Are Too Blazin To ‘Hold It’ Imma Rip Ya Face Till ‘It’s Folded’
You’re Done Kid … Watch As I Smash Triple Like the ‘Bases Is Loaded’
So Raw, Are Your Having-Flow? But Who Cares Since ‘The Fashion-Blows’
I’ll Drive Nails In Your Heart And Really Leave Your Life Screwed Like The ‘Passions Show’
I got this ‘Stranger Owned’ as I Replace Ya Brain With Air To ‘Change Your Dome’
My Spits efficient to Leave Ya Drifting Off Into Thin Air Like Sailors In ‘Danger Zone’
It’s nothing … This Battles Over,Either You In Or You 'Out Son' ...
I Spit illness So I'll Probably Be Too Sick To Remember the 'Out Come'
 
Old 10-27-04, 10:59 AM   #6
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uppin for some honest votes>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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Old 10-27-04, 05:40 PM   #7
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wooooooooorrrrdddd
 
Old 10-27-04, 09:47 PM   #8
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first off Automatik:
normally u come harder than you did.. the opener was str8 self-glorification, keep in mind this is a battle.. i was disappointed with;
It's a Known Fact Clowns Like This Will 'Never Be Nice'
I Spit In All Angles Quick ... So I Should Of Been Named A 'Veteran Twice'
My Rhymes Are Too Blazin To ‘Hold It’ Imma Rip Ya Face Till ‘It’s Folded’
^u should stop puttin' apostrophes thru ur verse, it's easy to see ur wordplay and etc... BUT
after the beginning portion, u did have some hard-hittin' punches like the baseball line with the bases loaded, not bad , u had sum aight couple of lines UNTIL the last bar another self-glorification:

It’s nothing … This Battles Over,Either You In Or You 'Out Son' ...
I Spit illness So I'll Probably Be Too Sick To Remember the 'Out Come'
^no good, nice flow, aight structure but quit mentionin' urself throughout keep attackin' him like he stole a million dollars from ya ass.. not bad but i'd say 6/10

next, Triple N:
better metas in urs.. kinda funny too.. u had the better opener and closer- using rotation and duck, duck goose lol... original, u didn't need the quote (") marks either, ur wordplay was also very clear.. ur best lines were the quaterback and the lawn time with- clockin' hose.. ha ha, not bad, ur flow was alright ur structure was mo' stretched than usual but u delivered harder punches and had better vocab.. 7/10

u both did a good job, g'luck with this and hit up my open battle..
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Old 10-27-04, 09:53 PM   #9
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Voted For: Triple_N

Personals Personals Personals. Automatik shit was aite punches here and there but i could find a decent personal.... and i found 2 on triple's

I spent 15 minutes peepin' ya tracks & your alicia keys parody was booty
Now....I want my "quarterback" to "audible" his "plays" into silent movies

^^This one was the nicest but played on some ways..but made me laugh and the other one about the cd at the end....

V/T

why: personals + Punches = Win

Simple math.
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Old 10-28-04, 08:13 PM   #10
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Uppin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>can We Get Some Votes !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 10-28-04, 10:46 PM   #11
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just checking polls....................................
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Old 10-29-04, 06:12 AM   #12
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Uppin for some votes on this.......................
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Old 10-29-04, 10:27 PM   #13
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Voted For: Triple_N

yo one sided battle

automatik
i expected more from you kid,your punches were wack,but u did have some nice wordplay and flow,and your structure was coo....but man u did not have any punches at all in this battle man...what happened?

triple N
you however had some nice and witty punches i liked that man,you had okay wordplay,and your flow plus your structure were decent,i think you won this man you came creative...

overall-triple n won this with better punches,creativity,and flow and structure,auto u did ok with the wordplay,and flow etc....but you didnt have hard hitting punches....and i seen better battles from you man....but yeah triple gets this

v/triple n
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Old 10-30-04, 10:46 AM   #14
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yeh yeh ... Triple took this one . i had like 5min to key up some shit ... it would of been alot more interesting if i had more time ...

but good battle ...
 
Old 10-30-04, 11:18 AM   #15
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good battle right here...real close...
Auto, ya verse was straight...the structure was on point so the it had a nice flow to it...punches were coo, the concepts behind them were good, but they it seemed like they coulda hit harder...but i didnt like your opener/closer cuz they were both self-glorification...

Triple, i liked ya verse too...structure was decent, but the lines were a lil stretched so the flow was hurtin a bit...but your punches were good...i was lmao @ some of them like the 'hose' line...some punches werent entirely original, but they had a different twist to 'em like the shakira line...which was coo i guess...overall, u had better consistency cuz u hit Auto in everyline...anyways,

V/ Triple N, for more consistency...
 
 


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