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10-24-04, 07:11 PM | #1 | |
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~Miss Avy~ Freestyle
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This is some quick shit... not my best but it is a drop.
~Miss Avy~ Avy that bitch who kills and no one sees At my decree beheading pricks slaughtered at my feet With no trick-or-treat I leave em breathless like I'm god Shit be named a fraud from ripping mods to defensless broads No one can stop this "Royal Highness" from marking dem clowns From Lil'Kims' to Foxy Browns' I be stealing all dem crowns! And no it's not the kind ya cap on ya tooth, here's the proof The truth is I knock too many bitches, I'm the female Babe Ruth! Yo To all these crews who be talking shit on this diamond piece I'll scratch a "crease" in ya skills and make yall bleed for reals From Poppin pills to dick enlargement thrills what a joke Just cuz ya broke in rhymes and ya ghostwriters write for dimes In the prime it's a crime and now it's time for some punishment From the "Heaven Sent" ones bitches get down and repent While bowing down to me then rap this bitch rap up with a bang The "Muderess" had disordained bitches and left them critically insane!! |
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10-24-04, 10:44 PM | #2 | ||
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IP:
hahaha that my girl..
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10-25-04, 09:54 AM | #3 | |
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IP:
^lol tru tru.
uppin this shit. |
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10-25-04, 03:25 PM | #4 | ||
+...Femin-iLL...+
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IP:
so so so so violent....lol, i lyke that....this was pretty n.y.c.e. for a key...you incorporated all tha elements and flowed it well...keep this shit upZ gurl....
-holla
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10-25-04, 08:53 PM | #5 | |
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^Thanks for the love and feedback. It was appreciated
uppin for more Last edited by ~Miss Avy~ : 10-25-04 at 08:55 PM. Reason: put in more words |
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10-25-04, 10:01 PM | #6 | ||
<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP:
Good shit gurl,,some fya lines in there, for a quick drop this was dope...keep at it..1
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10-26-04, 12:20 AM | #7 | |
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^Thanks for the positive feedback mami. Much Appreciated.
Uppin for more. |
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10-26-04, 12:27 AM | #8 | ||
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IP:
miss avy, a connfessions part 4 remix?? itll be nice to have a lady on it
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10-26-04, 12:31 AM | #9 | |
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^sure that be cool. PM me with what you have in mind about it.
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10-26-04, 04:05 AM | #10 | ||
Ms. Get Gully
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IP:
This str8 i was feeling the middle more than anything kind of fell off in the rhyme scheme to me toward the end and then it picked up with in the last couple lines..but the opener and middle part of this was nice. props better than i expected.
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10-26-04, 09:59 AM | #11 | |
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IP:
^Aiight thanks for the feedback ma. As I said before, It is much appreciated.
Uppin for more |
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10-31-04, 02:53 PM | #12 | |
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IP:
Uppin for feedback..
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10-31-04, 07:30 PM | #13 | |
As Seen On T.V.
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IP:
hott. wordplay got me.
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11-01-04, 01:55 PM | #14 | ||
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IP:
damn! u got some mad talent Miss.......dis almost made me crawl under my desk lol....luv da wordplay n erything....keep up da positive work girl..10/10
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11-01-04, 02:11 PM | #15 | ||
***cITYSLICka***
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feelin it miss avy.u got skillz 4sho.wuz feelin da whole thing no complaints.keep em comin'.
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