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Old 10-26-04, 01:51 AM   #1
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Mom's habits

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i was bored and i am kind of in a writers block..so i just thought i would drop a OM................................................ ..............................................

Moms Habits


mom i find It's pointless to call your self a mother...
when all you do is abandon me and my little brother...
n' how the fuck you gunna say "you always put your kids first"...
when it seems ever time you put your beer first...
your habits got u in a situation, where I don’t even know who you are...
But we know where to find you, a mile south sitting at the bar...
this impact has left a scar, a wound so deep nothing could fill it...
and our mother and son relation,bitch you habits done killed it...
and mom sorry aint gunna help any of this...
so i write a verse throw it on track and it becomes a diss...
so i explain to you life’s ups and downs...
the grins and giggles, the sadness and the frowns...
and what i wanted you to be, but what you became...
you choose liquor over flesh and blood, and bitch is a crying shame...
your youngest son don’t even call you mom, and you habits are to blame... some times i think you don’t have a brain nor a heart...
how could you do this shit,and let your family fall apart...
the ones you supposabley love and would do anything for...
but only thing you did mom was slam some more...
and now dads bitchin"i want to back hand this whore"...
Families are suppose to be about love, but you cause a war...
i cant take no more, got my heart so emotionaly full till my chest is soar...
I cant believe how you could stoop so low, and ditch us...
and when your around mom all you seem to do is bitch at us...
and say were the ones who cause you stress and make you drink...
but in all thought and mind you could change if you stopped and think...
your only hurting the onesthat love you so much...
mom drop the bottle and pick my little brother up...
and raise him better the you raised me, and show him you care....
don’t do like you did to me mom,shits just on fair...
the thoughts are running in your head,n' you start bend...
But mom take care of little david,cuz for me this is the end....

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Old 10-26-04, 02:57 AM   #2
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heres the link to the other OM i left feedback on.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1690671
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Old 10-26-04, 03:50 AM   #3
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5 views no feed back...come on people
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Old 10-26-04, 04:00 AM   #4
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this was deep and emotional...flow and everything else was good.. what more can i say, this was a good drop..

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Old 10-26-04, 04:07 AM   #5
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Thanks man.......
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Old 10-26-04, 03:48 PM   #6
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Uppin........Dose any one know how toleave feed back?
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