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Old 10-31-04, 01:51 AM   #1
Artemis
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blah, somethin' I keyed up for some girl. weerd

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Today you told me that you were feelin' so blu
So I'm writing this verse, jus to cheer you up, boo...
People hate on you, cuz they only jus jealous
They say they don't want you, but really they zealous
So why don't you tell us, how you became more than hottie?
Got brains, intelectual, and a whole rockin' body
Got a voice that's so sweet, like a sugar candy treat
Wit a smile, that drives me wild, wit a set of white teeth
Never turn up to look, when you pass me in the hall
But when you walk by, I turn around and trip and fall
When you move I'm in a trance, can't wait to get my chance
To ask you out on a date, so we can dance and romance
You kno I'll always pick you up, whenever you fall
If you need me, I'll be there in a flash, boo, jus you call...
One to the two, to the nine, one nine eight nine
...The greatest day on earth... the day the sun always shine


weerd, I don't care if you like or not, jus postin' it up weerd.
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Old 10-31-04, 01:56 AM   #2
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Yo, I got you SPuL! *hops on the chorus*

I am the one you denied
Brushed me off everytime tried
But im alright
I'm able to swallow my pride
And put all the bullshit to the side
If u ready to ride
Im down for a one night stand
I'll accept it any way that i can
Cuz i aint yo man
i'll try for whatever its worth
Just remember who played who first

Word...
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Old 10-31-04, 01:09 AM   #3
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^^^ ha werd yall, i give it a 7/10 cuz not much creative rhmyesm check mine yall,
good drop though
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Old 10-31-04, 02:28 AM   #4
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Today you told me that you were feelin' so blu who gives a fuck? shes a net hoee hoe shes a ho hoe shes a hoe i said that shes a hoe
So I'm writing this verse, jus to cheer you up, boo...
People hate on you, cuz they only jus jealous jealous of her fake pics pleaase lol
They say they don't want you, but really they zealous
So why don't you tell us, how you became more than hottie?
Got brains, intelectual, and a whole rockin' body her brain is non existant shes dumb and racist
Got a voice that's so sweet, like a sugar candy treat
Wit a smile, that drives me wild, wit a set of white teeth yea cum whitens teeth lol
Never turn up to look, when you pass me in the hall
But when you walk by, I turn around and trip and fall
When you move I'm in a trance, can't wait to get my chance
To ask you out on a date, so we can dance and romance
You kno I'll always pick you up, whenever you fall
If you need me, I'll be there in a flash, boo, jus you call...
One to the two, to the nine, one nine eight nine
...The greatest day on earth... the day the sun always shine


weerd, I don't care if you like or not, jus postin' it up weerd.

ok u did a good job flow was great it was pretty sweet ut shes a fake net hoe she posted fake pics and in the fake pics her ass looks nasty her teeth aint that white and she racist adn brains bitch please she got mad that i thought she was black then said she has black in her come on

but anyways kick ass verse spul great flow vocab is zealous a real word lol it was a sweet lil peics
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Old 10-31-04, 02:28 AM   #5
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lol thanks. weerd. uppin'....
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Old 10-31-04, 04:17 PM   #6
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pimp shit nigga, but you still wack "nah layins?" <wtf?
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