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ReQuiem | 5 | 100.00% | |
Golden shellz | 0 | 0% | |
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10-31-04, 04:21 PM | #1 | ||
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Golden shellz vs ReQuiem
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10-31-04, 04:21 PM | #2 | |
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Golden shellz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 04:21 PM.
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10-31-04, 04:33 PM | #3 | ||
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nigga ill bring dem ak;s out never hesitant to fill u lead
i need prescriptions nigga, didnt u read what my tittle said? u a bitch, ull get sliced more than Italian bread the last nigga that cracked jokes like u,ended up dead the barrels explode leavin ya insides GRUDGED like sara michelle gellar ill get ya BEAN rocked, but i aint talkin bout ROCKAFELLER man u really got courage, i dont know why u went through this take a hint we dont like ya crew neebies are useless u could never trust me nigga, ill get u popped wit ya own gat my record doesnt mean shit,now u know why niggas gotta fall back |
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10-31-04, 04:37 PM | #4 | ||
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for this line-i need prescriptions nigga, didnt u read what my tittle said?
i mean < bean=beanie siegel on rockafella records sara michelle gellar stared in the grudge in theaters now-im advertisin lol that dude smokajoka666 had died, get it joker=jokes |
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10-31-04, 04:39 PM | #5 | |
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ReQuiem has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 04:39 PM.
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10-31-04, 04:46 PM | #6 | |
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Yo
Ima Have to Propel Golden Shell's To Shatter Ya Frame, Tear Every Line You Produce,Have Ya wallowing In Shame, Ill Prize Ya Chest Cavatie's from Ya Rib's & Douse Em In Gasoline Frantic Crie's Echo Out Ya Windpipe,Wheezing Like U Addicted Ta Nicotine The Dude Still Gets His Dad's Cock Up His ass and Just says its Family Bonding So Wack He leaves Suicide Letter's In OM and still Theres no one Responding Ill have ya Vomiting Out Ya rhymes thats the Only way they Gonna be "Sick" So Go get Raped by ya Dad,Hoe,You've Been Ripped,Go find Another Dick ta Lick. Okay weak verse.just came off the top of my Dome..lol |
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10-31-04, 05:00 PM | #7 | ||
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yo wat da hell man u musta been think bout some gay shit to kkep talkin bout dick, anyway uppin
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10-31-04, 05:51 PM | #8 | ||
23-7, 16 Knockouts
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Voted For: Golden shellz
golden wins dis one. dis was one of da closest battle ive seen in a little while, but i think golden shellz took it because his punches were more direct and hit harder, vote golden Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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10-31-04, 06:01 PM | #9 | ||
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close battle wow of corse im winning over this homo u poppin mad shit requiem uppin
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10-31-04, 06:08 PM | #10 | ||
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Voted For: ReQuiem
Golden shellz-You got skills, you just waste em by basing your whole drop on gunplay....get original kid, it was a nice rap with a good structure n flow...but the overplayed concept killed ya ReQuiem-structure was a little off..but it didnt effect the flow to bad..noticed one personal...gay talk is overplayed...but you didnt base your whole rhyme scheme on it like Golden with gunplay... V/Requiem Reason:More original
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10-31-04, 06:18 PM | #11 | ||
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forot to add...please return the favor on my battle against Khaos or RapGod...thanks
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11-01-04, 03:16 PM | #12 | |
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What.....Golden?...Gonna get Ya D/R ta back u Up Eh?.....Uppin.....
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11-01-04, 04:20 PM | #13 | ||
Puttin MD On The Map
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Voted For: ReQuiem
checkin polls peeps
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11-01-04, 04:34 PM | #14 | ||
Puttin MD On The Map
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eh ill just explain it
golden- nigga ill bring dem ak;s out never hesitant to fill u lead i need prescriptions nigga, didnt u read what my tittle said? u a bitch, ull get sliced more than Italian bread the last nigga that cracked jokes like u,ended up dead the barrels explode leavin ya insides GRUDGED like sara michelle gellar ill get ya BEAN rocked, but i aint talkin bout ROCKAFELLER man u really got courage, i dont know why u went through this take a hint we dont like ya crew neebies are useless u could never trust me nigga, ill get u popped wit ya own gat my record doesnt mean shit,now u know why niggas gotta fall back ^^okay good verse...you had great punches......flowed good........you had okay wordplay.....coulda been better......you used nigga in your verse more than once so it kinda made me not feel your verse as much cuz there isnt much need to put it in there at all or at most once not more than once...but w/e....you structure was kinda off try and even your lines.....saw no multi's and no metas either so that took off your verse...personals i didnt see any........work on putin some personals multis metas and get better vocab if you had better vocab it woulda been a closer battle.... overall....6/10 requiem-Ima Have to Propel Golden Shell's To Shatter Ya Frame, Tear Every Line You Produce,Have Ya wallowing In Shame, Ill Prize Ya Chest Cavatie's from Ya Rib's & Douse Em In Gasoline Frantic Crie's Echo Out Ya Windpipe,Wheezing Like U Addicted Ta Nicotine The Dude Still Gets His Dad's Cock Up His ass and Just says its Family Bonding So Wack He leaves Suicide Letter's In OM and still Theres no one Responding Ill have ya Vomiting Out Ya rhymes thats the Only way they Gonna be "Sick" So Go get Raped by ya Dad,Hoe,You've Been Ripped,Go find Another Dick ta Lick. ^^okay very good verse.....you had really good punches just came out ahead of golden in this catagory......you had personals which were good....you verse flowed really nice........great vocab and worplay.......saw multi's which is good.......not really any metas your structure was good...but you def cam out ahead cuz you just overall came harder......just work on directing your personals a lil more like make them easier to understand that its a personal...(add a link) but not bad good drop man overall 8/10 peace~1 return the favor.....links in my sig
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11-02-04, 02:51 PM | #15 | ||
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oh my fuckin god i aint gettin dr/ed i jus cant believe im losin to u, oh holmes wait till this battle is done ima rip the shit outta u, and u dickriding the pimk i started that
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