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Old 11-02-04, 04:16 AM   #1
Chew187
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From: Canada "king of countries"
defying the odds

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Believe me bro catastrophe is sure to happen
the day this white boy tries to make it rappin
who'd a thought you'd be the one to beat the odds
since you face defeat & rarely ever get applaused
The instance I witnessed you're first time on stage
I have to admit I was enstormed with rage
caged in a way/I can never fill your shoes
with the cards i've been dealt I'm facing sudden doom
God knows I used to worship you too
nothing else can change cus the fact still remains
the "Rap game" has embraced my entire domain
cocaine & dust It's a must that i'm hustling
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Old 11-02-04, 04:42 AM   #2
Dex
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Pretty Hot!

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This is pretty hot! who did you have in mind when you were writing this?
Someone/Something has obviously pissed you off!
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Old 11-02-04, 01:45 PM   #3
Loveliss Grandz
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From: BrOOklyN,N.Y.
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short and sweet.tight drop chew.keep em comin'.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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Old 11-02-04, 01:52 PM   #4
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Nice drop man I like the word play you droped in this
verse, hott shit and yeah you can tell you was kinda
pissed when you droped this.

Stay up

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