Damn, I'm spittin' like crazy to day. Anyway...

Let Freedom Ring
Tainted

See Imma sick individual
Whose rhymes create visuals
And provide perceptive views
Of the lies told in our living rooms
As the TV blares in our ears
And reveals our worst fears
Which we only see in our nightmares
Our minds only shone
The comfort of our own home
As we turn up the ear phones
And our futures are just blown
Don't you know that it's cold out there
No remorse out there
No rewards for the deeds that are done out there
And it's more than I can bare
So now I really don't care
About the kicks I wear
And the lyrics I share
So let the the freedom ring
And forget about ya bling
Just lift ya voice and sing
Just let the freedom Ring

Come on peeps, feedback.

decent drop /8/10 get at mine in the sig

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Thanks, and I'll make sure to look at your peices.

i liked it .........ifelt it.......8/10.........couldve tried to make each line a little longer though

8/10 pretty good kid ....peeps mines it right below you

no doubt hot drop kid.9/10.keep em comin'.

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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE

it was a good flow but it was simple and repeative 7/10

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