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i burn messages in my textual experiment
testin those emcees with exceptional experience, wreak the industry like a five car collison, but im wreak-less, neva break in front of enemies, effortless energy i stress when i project my thoughts in my spits it like chemicals, ....who coming close to it? wise perfectionist vocab neva at a minium, punches go so fast, fags don't kno whats hittin em spew out venom on victims vicously when im rippin em death instantly, they don't kno whats killin em whiz spit prison barz, puttin ya mind in isolation easy to overstand, like a good conversation, wrong coverse i erurpt on occasion might add sum mo later holla
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drowsy muthafuckaz.......................
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i liked it for a freestyle it had good volcab nice use of multi's and flow keep that shit up
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don't sleep
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D.L.W Last edited by DaLyricalWhiz : 07-04-02 at 08:48 PM. |
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uppin my shit
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DAWG DONT UP YOURSELF THE BEST SHIT ALWAYS GETS SLEPT ONM THIS WAS GOOD BUT THEY WONT SEE IT TILOL THEY WAKE UP
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This was a decent spit, it was tidy for a keystyle, the wordplay was aight, jus didnt think it had any substance... The rhythm was steady, multies were shown throughout, more internal rhymes woulda smoothened everything up... Vocab was balanced, and there were some decent knowledge terms... More wordplay and punches, coulda made this even better, woulda come across somehow... It was decent though, try spitting over subject matter, solid... Keep elevating...
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