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Old 07-04-02, 12:13 AM   #1
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Post a lil key from da whiz im bored peep

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i burn messages in my textual experiment
testin those emcees with exceptional experience,
wreak the industry like a five car collison,
but im wreak-less, neva break in front of enemies,
effortless energy i stress when i project my thoughts in my spits it like chemicals, ....who coming close to it?
wise perfectionist vocab neva at a minium,
punches go so fast, fags don't kno whats hittin em
spew out venom on victims vicously when im rippin em
death instantly, they don't kno whats killin em
whiz spit prison barz, puttin ya mind in isolation
easy to overstand, like a good conversation,
wrong coverse i erurpt on occasion

might add sum mo later

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Old 07-04-02, 01:37 AM   #2
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drowsy muthafuckaz.......................
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Old 07-04-02, 06:05 AM   #3
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i liked it for a freestyle it had good volcab nice use of multi's and flow keep that shit up
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Old 07-04-02, 07:09 PM   #4
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Angry

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Old 07-04-02, 08:21 PM   #5
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Old 07-04-02, 09:05 PM   #6
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Old 07-05-02, 01:48 AM   #7
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Old 07-05-02, 02:33 AM   #8
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DAWG DONT UP YOURSELF THE BEST SHIT ALWAYS GETS SLEPT ONM THIS WAS GOOD BUT THEY WONT SEE IT TILOL THEY WAKE UP
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Old 07-05-02, 12:15 PM   #9
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This was a decent spit, it was tidy for a keystyle, the wordplay was aight, jus didnt think it had any substance... The rhythm was steady, multies were shown throughout, more internal rhymes woulda smoothened everything up... Vocab was balanced, and there were some decent knowledge terms... More wordplay and punches, coulda made this even better, woulda come across somehow... It was decent though, try spitting over subject matter, solid... Keep elevating...

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