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Old 11-04-04, 11:24 PM   #1
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Ayo,
I see none these pussies like bitches in the dark with black skirts
So peep how my rap verse shall attack verbs from crack herbs
Bunch of wack nerds with rhymes as cheesy as rat terds
See,I play like "Thomas" switch'd to kicker, when your "Zack" hurts
While I'm exposing your soft style, as if you lack shirts
I be like a full stomach once I bust shit,remaining n undaground head
Just like an os-trich!
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Old 11-04-04, 11:47 PM   #2
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Old 11-05-04, 12:22 AM   #3
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Where the fuck is my feeeeeedback! lol
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Old 11-05-04, 11:11 AM   #4
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damn no one dropping feed fuck this.
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Old 11-05-04, 11:43 AM   #5
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ey yo ima return da favor,but it was coo but it needs
to b longa and u need to work on ya wordplay
but overall it was tight keep doin ya thing
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