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Old 11-05-04, 06:15 PM   #1
Ice Pick
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Finished Alliteration A-Y(Peep Don't ZZzZzz"

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i'm a assassin assaulting ambitions and aspirations-
born brawn, blazin bazooka bombs n blood bathin-chasing celestial collages, clone cerebral cells-
destin to desolve diaphragms and display the details-
easily escaping earth, extreme elevation embrassed-
fuckin faggots can forget the futures filled wit flames-
gratifying ghosts gathering in gods gates-
hells head hung highly heroic in hate-
intinsify initicial insight in illiterate i's(eyes)
judged by jurys asa juvi my journey wAs justified-
a kleptomaniac killin wit keen kinetics
left ligaments lacerated, ya lost ya leverage-
mass massacers a master of murdering menators
a necromancer navigatin narcotics n-the-north
an obscene omen birthing ominous offspring
preventing poor preformance my imPerfections pausing
ya'll queer as quadroople quanity's of drag queens
rabid rotations of races rampaged in rap reads
suplexin shadows severin several sides n sections
terminating testicles n teats wit tentacles when i'm textin
utopia-vs-universe ultimately undergoing war but unscathed
vaccuming verses, vonerable yet viciously vague-
warming up warheads, in water we wait n wade-
x-it x-ceptance, x-terminate foes, no x-cape
Young being youthinized yearly we better yeild
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Old 11-05-04, 06:18 PM   #2
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nice shit... ive been doign alliterations mslef....

but your really good at it...
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Old 11-05-04, 06:20 PM   #3
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thats pretty damn good homie...keep droppin bombs on 'em...
8.5/10
Flow was a lil' choppy, but nice use of vocab, homie..
Check my Biblical Cypher drops..
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Old 11-29-04, 01:46 PM   #4
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upnng for feed............................
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Old 11-29-04, 01:54 PM   #5
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it was alrite but to much vocab no hate...
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Old 11-29-04, 02:46 PM   #6
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same here man i thought da same...its sounds more like poetry dan rap
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Old 11-29-04, 05:02 PM   #7
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do you even understand what the title is or means/.////

thats why it is like that,,,


a thru y on the alphabet
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Old 11-29-04, 05:09 PM   #8
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ya diss was nice vocabulary to...A to Z like that shit weerd...8/10...

peep my open mics and colllabs be sure to check armegeddon that ones a long collab and its fire..
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