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If u fuck with dis chic u gotta lace me with da "Finest"
pocket books with baby 38's gucci sweater& da latest fashion with da matching bracelet fludded with "Diamonds"/
30 g's in my grill when i get low on da "Dough"
trust me,I'm worth it cuz i get compliments mostly from
da "Lesbos"/
FLy me first class sippin on white russian or taquilla
"Drinks" for da winter lace with me da finest "Minks"
I really prefer baby-blue or hot "Pink" my vision be
da clearest cuz my shine can give vision to blind
"Chinks"/
I'm da type who light spliffs and look at da city-view
from a "Balcony" do what i gotta to make dis paper come
in quicker den "Rapidly" and when momma hit da g-spot
it aint no stoppin me(who?) dat bytch Danna D./
Trips to da tropics for da "Summer" i ride da cut off
drop-top while my nikka push da "Hummer" (shyt) we be
closer den a setence gettin cut off by a fuckin "Comma"/
so til death do us, i'mma play my "Positon" i be dat
grimy bytch in da corner high of ??? with my eyez "Glistening"/
rockin heavy set jews dat will break a neck if weared by a weak human "ANta-rex" all ya'll dudes who's viewing dis rhyme slip on a "Latex" and ride momma sex "Text"/

out

damn this would be a dope azz audio
cuz i could picture a dope azz flow on
this piece right here, had some nice
commercial linez in it, i'm commercial
so i like what u sayin, where u from??

Virgnia



i wanna do audio put dont have da right equip right now




but holla back and tell me how my freestyle wuz


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well it waz nice as hell

if u got aim i can hook
u up with audio equipment

It was typical but ill don't forget I said ill but yeah like my mans said it would be tight on audio because I would just have to hear it to see how it flows on a beat but keep it up

P.E.A.C.E.
Queen

you a hot femcee, i see the skills. the lines were a little choppy though, otherwise hot spit. i'mma keep readin' your threads. aight chick, up.

word this would seem to be a dope audio yo you from Virginia word i go to school in Va you got aim holla at me on aim blackflame1821 or yahoo MC_BlackFlame
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yo it's hot or what not but I think it'll just be better with a beat behind it.....so I'll just be waiting for the audio if ya'll gone hook it up....keep doing ya thang reppin for the femcees