Battle Rules:

5-20 Linez
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-09-04 at 11:30 PM

Must drop verse in 90 minutes after check in.

â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€- has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-04 11:02 PM.

Two_Bit has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-04 11:02 PM.

aight here we go here we go

yo names god's angel but ya say you from hell?
that dont make no sense, do ya know how to spell?
i see you on ya bycicle dawg, ringin the bell.
you aint a hot mc dawg go back to ya shell
you know what makes me wanna stray
is when rappers use pink, fuck it looks gay
your the type of guy that would say
"OHMYGOD, DONT WEAR WHITE AFTER LABOR DAY!"
dawg what you gotta do is pray i dont spray
ya house with my m4 while i light a J.
when ya want sex you gotta pay
i could rhyme about you all fuckin day
you that big a fag, you bout to be in a bag
your not a gangster, youv never commited a crime
how do i know? you hesitated writin 20 lines!!

Two Bit, Wanna learn a little bit?. You aint worth cow shit, Got it?
When you Actually bother to post your verse, Dont bother Revising Shit,
You wont need too, It wont matter they wont read You Wack Verse,
You hafta Black out a word If it has something to with word of Curse,
I broke my mic so i could prove I dont need a vocal to make you sad,
Well you have Officially proven to me that your Lines are terribly bad,
I fugured that out the way you set up your call out in bitch slapped,
Well Consider me the winner, And you should consider your Self "Rapped",
5-20 lines?, Hmm.. "Two" Is more your style, It aint worth a While,
My first Word could Beat your WHole entire verse by 200 miles,
Goodluck Beating me you will need it, Need a leprochan To conceed it,
You dont know half the shit you say, You need a dictionary Just to read it.
You shouldnt feed it, If you didnt even rap you'd be better than this,
The only thing you covering on this lawsuit is your slef with piss,
When the judge call you to the stand, You slam down ya hand,
I'm mad that I got merked, Give me I win, And thats a command!
Calm down Jeffro If you that desperit dont battl me, Dont you see?
I wont even end this with an Embarassing close, I will lift up my nose,
You will hear me say, Your honor, Thank you for letting me Diss on this Hoe~

Peace~~~

G'Luck Homie~

for a guy that wanted a 6 line battle you sure wrote alot, props. im out. gl

Yeah... Thanx..... Peace..

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Voted For: â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€-

this was a way one sided battle... shit wasnt even close, heres my break down....

Two Bit- structure was WAY off... punches and personals were very soft and didnt hit at all, wordplay and creativity were not there at all... overall bad verse, elevate like hell homie... seriously... no hate tho man... 2/10

Godz- good verse... structure was stretched but okay overall.. punches and personals were presant and some hit fairly hard. wordplay and creativity were also there and worked in the overall content of ya verse... i was some what impressed... elevate still no doubt but u got mad potential so keep doin what u do and stay up....

no hate to twobit just elevate homie and ya could get there...overall one sided battle........

VOTE-Godz