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11-12-04, 11:04 PM
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fuck all that shit....Ruff makin a come back, check it
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I'm Just- Urkron Records
check it i got first verse....leave me some feedback Never left any feedback... Closed
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11-12-04, 11:17 PM
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slow down... ride with the beat, and try and come with more power behind ur words... it gets better, I assume its a second cat spittin, he seems pretty decent.... vocals seem a little low... Honestly I cant tell how many different kids are spittin... I think its 3, but you all sound very similar aside from the fact that some ride the beat better than others... I'd say for the first cat to try and elevate to the level of the rest of the verses... and everyone keep droppin... 1.
Just noticed you have yet to leave feedback anywhere else in the forum.. this thread will be closed in the future if you fail to leave feedback in 2 other songs... This time I'll just let you know, for clarifications check the rules of the forum at the top of the forum...
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11-12-04, 11:19 PM
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lyrics is decent flow is pretty good..........just need a little better delivery and mic presence
second cat seemed more comfortable on tha mic.......he had a better flow and emotion same with tha third cat |
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