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Old 11-13-04, 12:54 AM   #1
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Taste My Medicine....Part II

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what you see isnt me, just a child with lost fantasies,
High degrees of expertise that i be displayin in these keys,
drop flow wit ease,but who im tryna please?,muh shit fo-eva "STAY-ON-TOP" like "LITTLE-BIRDIES-IN-TREES",
so sick you thought it was a disease,not-a-diss,but you best be scared-of-this,
cuz i be "DROPPIN-BOMBZ" on niggaz like i was a fuckin "TERRORIST",
"O Lord!MeN-Iz,you are killin em my friend,please slow down" *stops and takes a few breaths* "Alrite, start back up again",
verse to wild,only people like him able to get these words compiled,
like my style?only givin it to you mild,cause the capabilities of me will have you searchin for shelter like an "ILLEGITIMATE-CHILD",
remainin the best, killin the rest, regardless if you already knew me,
Damn, I still kant believe this cat is only "A FUCKIN NEWBIE",



second part of taste my medicine....expect many more.....(only 3..lol)

feedback peoplez.....................

dont sleep on this......................................
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Old 11-13-04, 10:18 AM   #2
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feedback people........damn.......................
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Old 11-13-04, 10:59 AM   #3
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what you see isnt me, just a child with lost fantasies,
High degrees of expertise that i be displayin in these keys,
drop flow wit ease,but who im tryna please?,muh shit fo-eva "STAY-ON-TOP" like "LITTLE-BIRDIES-IN-TREES",
so sick you thought it was a disease,not-a-diss,but you best be scared-of-this,
cuz i be "DROPPIN-BOMBZ" on niggaz like i was a fuckin "TERRORIST",
"O Lord!MeN-Iz,you are killin em my friend,please slow down" *stops and takes a few breaths* "Alrite, start back up again",
verse to wild,only people like him able to get these words compiled,
like my style?only givin it to you mild,cause the capabilities of me will have you searchin for shelter like an "ILLEGITIMATE-CHILD",
remainin the best, killin the rest, regardless if you already knew me,
Damn, I still kant believe this cat is only "A FUCKIN NEWBIE",



DIS WAS NICE, GOOD MULIT'Z AND NICE FLOW GOOD WORDPLAY I GIVE U 7/10 IF U PUT VOCAB'Z DIS WOULD BEEN AN DECENT PIECE AND DONT TRY TO LIKE FORCE YA RHYMES FIX THA STRUTURE ITS KINDA LIKE MESSING UP DA FLOW

AIGHT PEACE OUT
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


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Old 11-13-04, 11:07 AM   #4
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thanks drastic......more feedback peoplez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 11-13-04, 01:13 PM   #5
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wake-up bitches!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!
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Old 11-13-04, 01:16 PM   #6
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Yo Men-inz Can U Put An Feedback In Da Open Mic Called

" Choas Sit Down" Plz

I'll Appreciate An Feedback Mayne
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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Old 11-13-04, 09:14 PM   #7
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Old 11-13-04, 10:15 PM   #8
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*gettin pissed off*......................................
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Old 11-13-04, 10:43 PM   #9
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Yo good multis dawgz..its was simple but it was nice...

I'm suprised the flow was on point even tho the structure was oddly placed...

nice drop homie

"like my style?only givin it to you mild,cause the capabilities of me will have you searchin for shelter like an "ILLEGITIMATE-CHILD","

^^Your best line i feel was this one
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Old 11-13-04, 11:02 PM   #10
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thanx.......more feed...............................
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Old 11-14-04, 01:52 PM   #11
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Old 11-14-04, 04:16 PM   #12
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nice drop...8.5/10...keep bringin dem multies...
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Old 11-14-04, 04:59 PM   #13
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thanx mayn, more feedback peoplez
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Old 11-14-04, 05:17 PM   #14
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you had a nice opener....caught my eye right off the back

what you see isnt me, just a child with lost fantasies,
High degrees of expertise that i be displayin in these keys,
9/10

drop flow wit ease,but who im tryna please?,muh shit fo-eva "STAY-ON-TOP" like "LITTLE-BIRDIES-IN-TREES",
so sick you thought it was a disease,not-a-diss,but you best be scared-of-this,
cuz i be "DROPPIN-BOMBZ" on niggaz like i was a fuckin "TERRORIST",
"O Lord!MeN-Iz,you are killin em my friend,please slow down" *stops and takes a few breaths* "Alrite, start back up again",
verse to wild,only people like him able to get these words compiled,
like my style?only givin it to you mild,cause the capabilities of me will have you searchin for shelter like an "ILLEGITIMATE-CHILD",

Wordplay was sick..nice drop right here....the middle work 10/10

remainin the best, killin the rest, regardless if you already knew me,
Damn, I still kant believe this cat is only "A FUCKIN NEWBIE",

Closer was pretty nice....but it was kind plain.... 9/10
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Old 11-15-04, 06:39 PM   #15
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thanx for da feedback may'n...more peeps
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