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11-13-04, 12:54 AM | #1 | |
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Taste My Medicine....Part II
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what you see isnt me, just a child with lost fantasies, High degrees of expertise that i be displayin in these keys, drop flow wit ease,but who im tryna please?,muh shit fo-eva "STAY-ON-TOP" like "LITTLE-BIRDIES-IN-TREES", so sick you thought it was a disease,not-a-diss,but you best be scared-of-this, cuz i be "DROPPIN-BOMBZ" on niggaz like i was a fuckin "TERRORIST", "O Lord!MeN-Iz,you are killin em my friend,please slow down" *stops and takes a few breaths* "Alrite, start back up again", verse to wild,only people like him able to get these words compiled, like my style?only givin it to you mild,cause the capabilities of me will have you searchin for shelter like an "ILLEGITIMATE-CHILD", remainin the best, killin the rest, regardless if you already knew me, Damn, I still kant believe this cat is only "A FUCKIN NEWBIE", second part of taste my medicine....expect many more.....(only 3..lol) feedback peoplez..................... dont sleep on this......................................
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11-13-04, 10:18 AM | #2 | |
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feedback people........damn.......................
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11-13-04, 10:59 AM | #3 | |||
mess with me get cooked
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IP:
what you see isnt me, just a child with lost fantasies,
High degrees of expertise that i be displayin in these keys, drop flow wit ease,but who im tryna please?,muh shit fo-eva "STAY-ON-TOP" like "LITTLE-BIRDIES-IN-TREES", so sick you thought it was a disease,not-a-diss,but you best be scared-of-this, cuz i be "DROPPIN-BOMBZ" on niggaz like i was a fuckin "TERRORIST", "O Lord!MeN-Iz,you are killin em my friend,please slow down" *stops and takes a few breaths* "Alrite, start back up again", verse to wild,only people like him able to get these words compiled, like my style?only givin it to you mild,cause the capabilities of me will have you searchin for shelter like an "ILLEGITIMATE-CHILD", remainin the best, killin the rest, regardless if you already knew me, Damn, I still kant believe this cat is only "A FUCKIN NEWBIE", DIS WAS NICE, GOOD MULIT'Z AND NICE FLOW GOOD WORDPLAY I GIVE U 7/10 IF U PUT VOCAB'Z DIS WOULD BEEN AN DECENT PIECE AND DONT TRY TO LIKE FORCE YA RHYMES FIX THA STRUTURE ITS KINDA LIKE MESSING UP DA FLOW AIGHT PEACE OUT
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11-13-04, 11:07 AM | #4 | |
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thanks drastic......more feedback peoplez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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11-13-04, 01:13 PM | #5 | |
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wake-up bitches!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!
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11-13-04, 01:16 PM | #6 | |||
mess with me get cooked
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Yo Men-inz Can U Put An Feedback In Da Open Mic Called
" Choas Sit Down" Plz I'll Appreciate An Feedback Mayne
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11-13-04, 09:14 PM | #7 | |
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feedback.......................................... ...........
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11-13-04, 10:15 PM | #8 | |
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*gettin pissed off*......................................
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11-13-04, 10:43 PM | #9 | ||
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Yo good multis dawgz..its was simple but it was nice...
I'm suprised the flow was on point even tho the structure was oddly placed... nice drop homie "like my style?only givin it to you mild,cause the capabilities of me will have you searchin for shelter like an "ILLEGITIMATE-CHILD"," ^^Your best line i feel was this one
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11-13-04, 11:02 PM | #10 | |
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thanx.......more feed...............................
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11-14-04, 01:52 PM | #11 | |
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feedback.......................................... ...........
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11-14-04, 04:16 PM | #12 | ||
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nice drop...8.5/10...keep bringin dem multies...
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11-14-04, 04:59 PM | #13 | |
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thanx mayn, more feedback peoplez
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11-14-04, 05:17 PM | #14 | ||
I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP:
you had a nice opener....caught my eye right off the back
what you see isnt me, just a child with lost fantasies, High degrees of expertise that i be displayin in these keys, 9/10 drop flow wit ease,but who im tryna please?,muh shit fo-eva "STAY-ON-TOP" like "LITTLE-BIRDIES-IN-TREES", so sick you thought it was a disease,not-a-diss,but you best be scared-of-this, cuz i be "DROPPIN-BOMBZ" on niggaz like i was a fuckin "TERRORIST", "O Lord!MeN-Iz,you are killin em my friend,please slow down" *stops and takes a few breaths* "Alrite, start back up again", verse to wild,only people like him able to get these words compiled, like my style?only givin it to you mild,cause the capabilities of me will have you searchin for shelter like an "ILLEGITIMATE-CHILD", Wordplay was sick..nice drop right here....the middle work 10/10 remainin the best, killin the rest, regardless if you already knew me, Damn, I still kant believe this cat is only "A FUCKIN NEWBIE", Closer was pretty nice....but it was kind plain.... 9/10
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11-15-04, 06:39 PM | #15 | |
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thanx for da feedback may'n...more peeps
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