yo, i aint here for no shot outs.
im here to blow ya back out.
step on ya face them titles im ready to take,
snatch out ya hands, im here so that type of shit is at stake.
dont give me no looks just get ready to speak them hooks,
so i can buss ya ass smile at you and tell what i took!
dont look shook, cuz im not gonna hurt you physically
just murder you mentally before the count of 1.2..3
I'm ready!

wow......up ya vocab, structure, rhyme scheme, topics, metas

i mean its aight it aint nothin special........just overall elevate

no hate

all around u need to elevate.......

better be talkin to kelsick

Yeah u need to learn some vocabs so ya rymes sound more complex homie...it was too simple you show promise tho keep posting more rymes an up ya skillz

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got potential...but elavate...

yea mayne i think they all said it best
up ya vocab,elvate,flow need to b betta
try usin multis, but keep doin ya thing u
gon get thurr homie......holla

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Drop Wasn't Terrible But As U Already Heard From Them^ U Must Elevate.i'm Not Gonna Leave A Rating Just These Words Of Encouragement.
Ur Not A Bad Emcee Just Show Us Ur Full Potential.express Ur Mind More Graphically Thru The Use Of Words.

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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE

yeah u do need some elevatin' but hey stick around here and u soon will.
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