Witness, the hottness, droppin' verbals, iller than a cancer patient/
no more waitin', get ready for the extortion/
make u niggaz release the inner bitch emotion/
when I come through with thee essential, verbal proclamation/
which consists a bigger distinction/
between the glorious and the rest of the rap nation/
i rest at thee highest division/
disfunction ur ability to process locomotion/
read and make use of the rational rap indoctrination/
that i deliver like education/
this information never similar to a theological orientation/
given by your religious association/
shit's hardcore, thugged out like sopranos on television/
vision PVC, the murderous congregation/
regulate, dominate like the military dictatorship of hitler/
never hesitate to pull the trigger/
I spit lyrix like water, flowing down the river/
soo.. playa.. listen to thee individual/
who's soo intelligent, known as an intellectual/
with the ability to work like a criminal/
so.. dont try to fuck with mah lyrical mineral, cuz i'm situated at another level/
i'm known to have that personality of cruelty/
but u should be worried/
cuz Hazaaam the glorious, is the hardest, rap artist/
make niggaz dissapear like the taliban government, so bow down to the rap specialist/
hardcore like the sep. 11 suicide attackers, did to the New York buildings/
attack enemies by moving to different territories like bunch of thug pilgrims/
then paralyze and leave 'em sittin on wheel chairs like cristopher reed/
I once was a little seed, now grown up to be a tree/
i may be another ordinary motherfucker with a sophisticated personality/ but i show superiority/
my biography will one day become the greatest of the century like Muhammad ALI!!!

-what!!!!

<-hardcore like the sep. 11 suicide attackers, did to the New York buildings/
attack enemies by moving to different territories like bunch of thug pilgrims/->

this shit was mad hot
your vocab was far from simple
i really did learn something
thanks for the lecture..LoL

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Man, this was genreally a nice flow...vocab was brilliant...flow was great...imagery was outstanding...

All in all, a brilliant drop...

Keep it comen..

Peace n god bless

thanx for the feedback...

appreciate it..

one!

we takin' this shit over again, runnin' these boards like it ain't shit. another hot one from assasin, showin' em how we do it here in puntoville... vocab., wordplay, rhymin' scheme, all were on point.

no doubt

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one more time

shit was hot dirty, vocab was a lil too vivid, it kinda made it seem like you was tryin too hard, but it fa sho was hott to def...1

I think there were both good points and bad points to this... The concept was iLL, a tight thought and ya showed your skill to what you were thinking and the subjects you were talking about, it was well displayed... Imagery was nice, this helped with the vocab, combined you bought over metaphors and visions which worked well together... I werent feeling the rhyme scheme, I was finding it choppy, look at ya syllables when dropping larger words, your syllables were well off, and it made the piece lacc its rhythm... More multies and internal rhymes woulda made this a winner, jus watch out for em, use more to your advantage, LOOK into this... Otherwise im feeling the ideas, keep dropping the knowledge and elevate to the fullest...

Peez...

peachy shit assassin


had a good flow to most of it
vocab was quailty man
good ended too

keep it comin
lata..

i appreciate it..

yo RhetoriX, thanx for the feedback... that's the biggest reply i have ever gotten..

one luv!!

peace

DONT SLEEEEP!!!!!

this was a tight piece
great imagery
and good flow and vocab

keep doin ur thang

You didn't rhyme, but it was an ok piece, peace