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11-14-04, 05:07 AM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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Damn u..Cupid
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2nd try at this Poem shit Funny how it alwayz seems good in the Beginin Funny how Love can Develop from a Friendship If Givin your Heart is a Crime Then i Commited it Gave you all of me from Thoughts 2 Penmanship I put you Upon a Petistile,Gave u the Best of Me Remorse? Grammy and even my Daddy Left Me This Love Developed Unbelievably me into a Man Undeniable Feelings for You are Here in FirstHand But you Alloud another Man too come in Between If Love is Blind,..Then your Beauty i Never Seen Please allow me to Hold my Ownself Responsible But i Promise you My Memories are Unstoppable Ive had 2 deal with all of the Future Reputations Chest Out Chin up i Embraced all of Tribulations What is this Realy Worth? Such a Devine Force Allow me 2 Dismember from you Now b4 Divorce I have no choice but 2 Blame myself am i Stupid? Reply come back Negative.I blame this 1 on Cupid .....Damn...
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11-14-04, 05:10 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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weerd am feelin this dope for a secong shot at it keep droppin.....an cough check me AN nos's topical battle takin back my crown cough...that is all...
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11-14-04, 01:31 PM
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damn,i enjoyed reading this, it was very descriptive and emotional man, nice vocabulary and flow to this also, if this is true and whats going on in your life, be strong, and dont let anyone hurt your feelings, especially a dumb chick......lol....keep droppin man...1
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11-14-04, 01:49 PM
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4sho thanks 4 the luv
uppin
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11-14-04, 03:47 PM
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I Actually Thought This Was Dope...Good On Everything Wordplay, and Emotion, In Fact It's Relevant To What I'm Feelin Now..(My Story is in the Lounge)
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11-14-04, 04:15 PM
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Yea but im feelin better now
fuck dat bitch Uppin
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11-15-04, 12:55 AM
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IP:
uppin this shit
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11-16-04, 02:21 AM
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^yea, fuck that bitch, but uhmm fa real u need to do poetry fa real, u got a good way with wordz fa real....
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11-16-04, 02:24 AM
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IP:
uppin ima take poet of the month sometime soon damnit
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11-18-04, 05:32 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP:
upppin............
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11-19-04, 04:28 AM
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Damn!That shit was dope!Yeah, as someone else said, you need to do more poetry stuff, you have good wordplayin skills.
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11-20-04, 11:38 AM
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FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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ya mayn...good drop...good 2 get that shit off ure chest tho right...been there...not only did this flow, but yo u used nice vocab, and aaaaything...good look fam...9/10...~1~
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11-20-04, 02:10 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP:
yea im done wit tha shit now tho
dont even think about it
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11-20-04, 10:15 PM
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IP:
yo cuz this sick nigga..matter of fact..I'ma nominate yo ass..
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11-20-04, 10:33 PM
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^Quotable..
nice shit *Troop* keep doin ya thing..9.4/10
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