Aiight took at least 2 hours to sort cool edit and soundclick, so I jsut spit my Xclusive diss real quick, excuse the quality, got a sore throat.

But yo, gimme some feedback, Link is in my sig (it says soundclick )

Top one, Like Toy Soldier's is nothin yet.

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yea ok more emotion and mic pressence if i could hear the lyrics i would have said they are good ... so basically its just your first one so dont take offense to any of this shit.. keep droppin we need more audio cats

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yea, you have a nice voice, just try to rhyme louder, thats about all, but you seemed to have decent flow, just keep droppin man,..1^^^word, we need more audio cats......oh and peep my drop, called unfinished.......lol, in the siggy, and this forum..1

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Aiight thanks for the feedback, props to you both, I'ma check that collab when home fluid, poor ass college got no speakers...

But word, I just wanted to get somethin out, even it it didnt sound that great..

Blah..

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blah i can fix ur quality...and i forgot u was from UK..and U CANT EVEN HEAR U..no emotion.u sound like u in ur room tryna hide from ur mom LOL..blah ull get better mayn..its all in good time...I cant hear u at all..u'll get there though

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For someone who is starting out on audio you are not too bad.
You show alot of room for improvement.
Your quality will get better as you go along and learn few tricks along the way.
Keep up.
Peace.

Thanks mans, much appreciated, and kontro lol, I did try makin it quieter, but Meh, When I spit louder, it goes all Pfft if ou know what I mean, I need a homje made screen thing, lol, Fucked if I know what they called.

Uppin.

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ya man decent beat and all...sign louder tho but still i can understand the lyrics and they're pretty dope

YOu need to do a few things...you should Turn up ya vocals get some 1 to mix ya shit fo ya i wasn't feelin this

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Yeah you can tell this was done right quick... No emotion man.... If its a battle get at em... Say shit like u mean it... Sound kind of timid... Flow was pretty coo tho from what i could tell... Lyrics seemed iight... Just work on it..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160798

Get at that when u can

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made me laugh now that i know your that wack at audio ill laugh if i ever battle you
hahahahahahahhahahahahahhahaha

^wheres ur audio at?...............

........u been sayin its coming soon for like a month........

Xclusive, In case you didnt realise by the amount of times I said it

THAT WAS WACK

yet it still got ok from ppl, meaning, that your SHIT cos I own you like loose change bitch.

Thanks for the feed ppl, I know I got a few problems to sort out, that was a real quick ass drop, jsut wanted to get summin out

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not as good as i hoped.................

...kinda seemed like u was jus talkin on the track...jus work on flow and delivery and emotion.............