Yo you can't take disses like i can't take bitches
your audios skills are so wack bitch u got me in stiches

you live ur name up to the hype but ya musics not my type
your like a growing apple that an't even yet gone ripe

So do ya self a favour call ya grandma to save yer
the truth is she hated you cause you never obeyed her

So stop the bull shit flow cause nobody ever wanna know
caim your the illest mc bitch you need a heart pacer to flow

To me all you are is a dick head can't wait till your dead
your the biggest dick rider ever know to da site or said

how did this person ever think he was real I don't understand
the stupid ass should go like when strobe gave him a bann

I love your crew title destin to rhyme more like destin 2 cry
I'm more hopin that you'd change that crew 2 destin 2 die

I don't give a fuck about your music it's all dum shit
you'll catch one man band fuckin mad dog wid a trumpit

Fuck ya mad dog and that goes for any mutha fucker who got shit on me....

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......................6.33333333333333/10
up the vocab bruh.....blahhh at best

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The Candy Shop!!!

IM PUSHIN AUDIO COCAINE

Ive slightly improved my game a bit and im ony dissing this mad punk ass bitch cause he started the beef and he is a geek...

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Same as Third.......6/10 Work On Vocab and Harder hittin' dissin'.......

Btw 3-0 PUNK....................to me

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yea, being a diss u shoulda added more vocab (better ones) cuz this was kinda simple but u did have assonance rhymes, but uhmm u need to work on either personals or punches take one at a time.. u can stick with punches then do personals for now til u get comfortable, then start using punches a lil' by a lil' then put all the shit together... and there u go..
get at me
pz..

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Sinner This Was A Little Too Simple.vocab Needs Major Improvement.content Wasn't Good Here.but I Guess It Served It's Purpose In Gettin' Ur Point Across.good Luck Wit' This One...........5/10........keep Elevatin'

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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE

Yo you can't take disses like i can't take bitches
your audios skills are so wack bitch u got me in stiches
/\ weak opener again more vocab needed

you live ur name up to the hype but ya musics not my type
your like a growing apple that an't even yet gone ripe
/\ wtf kinda punch is that???...lol

So do ya self a favour call ya grandma to save yer
the truth is she hated you cause you never obeyed her
/\ fake personal...coz u don't know him and you need to change the subject a lil more if it came to a battle...this personal would now be officially played

So stop the bull shit flow cause nobody ever wanna know
caim your the illest mc bitch you need a heart pacer to flow
/\ best punch prolly again flow was aight but still more work needed

To me all you are is a dick head can't wait till your dead
your the biggest dick rider ever know to da site or said
/\ weak

how did this person ever think he was real I don't understand
the stupid ass should go like when strobe gave him a bann
aight punch but nothing special

I love your crew title destin to rhyme more like destin 2 cry
I'm more hopin that you'd change that crew 2 destin 2 die
Eugh another destined 2 die bar thats more played than Playground games @ School

I don't give a fuck about your music it's all dum shit
you'll catch one man band fuckin mad dog wid a trumpit
/\ weak closer...i won't even go into detail

Overall Feedback

I'm not even gonna go into detail about this...but if he's seriously that wack why haven't you battled him by now???...seriously i mean u brag that ur better than him...why not prove it??? 5/10

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List of people who've Ducked Me:
KnightShade
mAtW
Bizzy

"Yo you can't take disses like i can't take bitches"<------you cant get girls, or you cant beat them up?

"So do ya self a favour call ya grandma to save yer
the truth is she hated you cause you never obeyed her"<----------Weak

"I love your crew title destin to rhyme more like destin 2 cry
I'm more hopin that you'd change that crew 2 destin 2 die"<------ya only good line and it was still whack, ya only punch had no weight behind it


im sorry but that was straight up WHACK.......you started off dissing yourself and then had virtually no heat sorry dawg keep elavatin

3/10 vocab was shit...punches non-effective, and too simple.

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