http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1745354
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1745350


aight this is a collab i was asked to get on...Frst is Anxiety wit his first audio track so big ups to him..then my nigga DeadlyVision...then me...so yall enjoy aight...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/s...osophamusic.htm

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[.Diabolic:.]

1st dude...
listening to him right now, some dope lyrics but the flow is pretty off, and it doesnt seem to flow very smoothy could use some work on timing.

2nd dude...
some dope effects, good producing, all of his S's sound weird, great flow this part of the song was dope...

3rd dude... (you)
wow some awesome lyrics, i was def feeling this shit. I can relate to you alot,
"middle school days i was teased for fun
now im bigger then ever, i dont need to run"
that was a pretty dope line right there. Honestly i think ya drop was the best. The first drop could be better, but all in all a pretty dope song




(return the favor)

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*listening*

Lol....I remember this Anx.....anyway, I gave you the feedback for your verse already. DV......what's up with the SSSSSSSS shit with your audios now? Flow was cool, but it seemed like you had an odd number of lines. Diabolic flowed ok, kinda slow though. Lyrics were alright from all.....anyway, keep dropping

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1st dude good for his first audio flow and elivery couyld use some work

2nd guy flow was nice delivery was good to lyrics were str8 effects were pretty coo

3rd diabolic flow was str8 voice and mic presense is good lyrics were nice

over-all pretty tight collab the mixing maybe could have been done a bit better were the verses connected good ish anyway -peace-

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I.nfamouz L.yrikal L.egendz

dope... really enjoyed this track.. not feeling anxiety's verse much.. and yeah dv seems like odd number of lines.. and i wasnt feeling all the effects too much.. diabolic.. u dropped a HOT verse...

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My Lines Are ILL yo

Damn i prolly did 2much hiss reduction...

lol

sssssssssssssssssssss but this had actually no real topic.

We just did it in 5 min to 15

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hmmm, i love this beat,it gets you pumped....anxiety, not bad, but your flow was a little off, deadly, your verse was good,lyrics, and felt the emotion in it, kinda loud tho, and the ss,you know, diabolic, you did great in this too, good flow and delivery, overall great job guys....1

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