Jay-Z, he ain’t got nothing on me,
Cause Beyonce don’t sing the chorus for me,
Don’t need to plug myself on daytime TV,
Don’t need to sell myself on Regis and Kelly

Look at that chick sitting in the crowd,
Her hairs all done, now ain’t she proud?
If you’re not gonna listen, then I’m gonna get loud.
Wear my shroud,
Grab some kronik, get fucking plowed,
But that kinda shit, it ain’t allowed.

Don’t need to sell myself to society,
Driven by money, and little girlies,
Don’t wana sell my songs to little teenies,
As a matter of fact, if you’re under twenty,
Turn off your radio, then your TV.

Suck my dick,
Take a lick,
Spit on it,
And make it real slick.
But make it quick,
Cause I gota take a shit,
This song’s over…
Time to quit.

this drop isnt too bad,short but allright.nice rhyme's in it.bar's could be slightly longer,the last verse need's to be stretched a bit more..
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she smiled at me I said Suck my dick,
she said she dont swallow but she'll Take a lick,
if it's dry then bitch Spit on it,
i needa cum,then split so make it real slick.
suck it good But make it quick,
Cause I gota take a shit,
why the fuck you still listning This song’s over…
fuck i hate my work it's Time to quit.

blah.

just giving you an example of longer bar's.

but keep this shit coming.

yeah cool cool. good point


thx