this keystyles based on a nigga who told me a story from jerzey city, where im from... so check it

Kidz dese dayz on every corna dey finna get laid,
If a nigga stunt a pistol wave, next thing his ditch get made,
All of sudden a nigga snitch and his lift get paved,
A crew set camp at his house shoot shit in his bitches braids,
But no matta how many dead daughters, no charge fa manslaughter,
He'll slay tha whole fam, includin his sister and his damn father,
If he slip up he gunna get gunned down and dipped for starters
Den he pop Cris and watch as you drink tha toliet water,
Try ya weight wit him man but you cant fuck wit tha gritty,
He'll steal one in ya mouf n have ur grill lookin like 50'z,
You can talk ya shit but onli good rhymes influence thee,
Wen he go out he "BLOWz" more "Billz" den Monica Lewinsky,
Nah this shit aint a joke B, betta bring more blow and coke see,
Cuz aint no stoppin till he chokes all who approach, knock em bak to tha "Coach Seat"..

lemme kno whut yall think...on da real

allright drop, your topic is played. Even though it's real life shitrop's like this a thousand time's..feel me?

as for rhyme's. you have some nice rhyme's in this

You can talk ya shit but onli good rhymes influence thee,
Wen he go out he "BLOWz" more "Billz" den Monica Lewinsky,

I like this bar.. .
overall id give it 5/10.
keep dropping,keep elevating