WITH NO LIGHT IN SIGHT I CRY AS I WATCH THIS DIE, I HAVE HATE FOR THIS EXISTANCE, RULES, LAWS AND RESTRICTIONS, SO WITH THESE WORDS THE POWER OF CHANGE IS MINE, WITH LAWYERS WE CANT TRUST AND DOCTOERS WHO LIE, WE'LL DIE ALL IN DUE TIME, SO WITH THE WORDS AS MY POWERS AND WITH ALLIES AT MY SIDE THE POWER OF CHANGE IS ALL MINE, BUT AS CHILDREN START TO STAND JUST TO FALL FROM THEIR HELPING HANDI NOTICE WE'RE LOSING TIME, SO WITH THE WORDS IN MY POWER AND MY ALLIES AT MY SIDE...WE'D KNOW THAT IF WE DIED, WE DIED CAUSE WE TRIED.

the way this poem is put is great im really feeling it the ending is fantastic! great work

this poem was good..but everything lately seems so dark on this site..hmm maybe i should add some light to it....keep it up tho...and always elevate..much luv..God bless...1..

powerful piece...felt where you were coming from most def....the capitals dont help when reading it...but still was a raw and well put piece..respect...

YO WASS UP CUZ DAT PIECE WAS POWERFUL. HOLLA AT ME DOGG. WE GOTTA CHYLL AGAIN. KEEP POSTIN. 1LUV