Yo This Song is really my most emotional ever

It Describes the shyt im goin through at home
Wit my mom jus gettin married and them leavin me here wit my grandma
THank GoD i got her or id be on the streets

Its not the best quality but deffinately one of my hottest joints since ive posted

Please Leave me Sum feed Fam

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/t...iriousmusic.htm

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If i Had modding privalages.. i'd close this.. because u didnt give feedback to ne other songs on the page.. go choose two other threads, listen and give Good Constructive criticism on it... and edit this post or'll i'll get it closed.. -1

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^^^^Geesh man...learn to spell privileges

ok you got a eminem flow sound kinda like him too but the shit is tight good flow and lyrics could be better but are still dope nice shit with a little work you could be better if your in new york i can help you get better and maybe get you management if your willing to work

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dam man.... u do kinda sound like him... nice flow.... could feel hate...... yea quality could be worked out.....werd

i wasent really feelin the eminem sound.. i think you should find you and put more of you into your shit.. it seems like your tryna copy em, and i think thats wack.....

but ne ways..

lyrically, i thought this wasent to strong.. u were pretty random.... but the most important thing is to find your own style.. cause honestly, that eminem aint workin for you in my eyes.. to do a eminem style, you need his lyrics and delivery.. otherwise the shit dont work,, Just sayin was on my mind.. but i guess keep droppin.....

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You sound like Eminem....this i can confirm...but it's not a good impression...even the beats Eminem ish wit the bell...and um calm down a lil you need to find your own style...keep droppin though

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