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11-25-04, 03:45 AM
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Banned: Biting
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NightMare(Death Version)
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Death
Death Is Calling For Me The Sky's Dark...Black The Weather Is Stormy..... I Can't Believe It......This Is Actually Happening Like It's A Story..... My Eyes Get Small.>.....As I Hear My Name Call It's Getting Cold.....Dont Know What To Do..... My Arms Is Weak Legs Is Numb My Hands Turning Blue........ Mouth Aint Speaking...I Cant Walk As I Here Death Aproach The Door... *Knock**Knock* Who's There?......What Did You Come Here For?... I Get No Anwser As I Start To Crawl.....I'm Turning On My Back.... As The Door Nob Turns And A Shodow.....In The Light Fills The Crack.... And The Door Falls......Strait To The Ground... I Could Almost Taste The Blood In My Mouth I Could Of Drowned.... A Shodow Hits The Wall...Who Could That Be??...... It's Head Lifts Up Looking Diretly At Me.......Steps In The Door Way Walking Closely Toward Me....I Knew It Was Death.....By The Way I Smelt It's Breath..... Now It's Up Close In My Face....My Heart Beating At A Fast Race.....A Paste You Could Never Relate.... I Knew It Was Death I Swear It From A Mile Away...Lasy Day On My Callender I Wont Smile Today...... As I Thought I Was The Victim In A Murder Scene....... Woke Up In The Morning...................And It Was All A Dreamm!... |
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11-25-04, 03:49 AM
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Watering You Down...
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this is good, i like it...
i like how you ended it good open mic...
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