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Old 07-07-02, 05:30 PM   #1
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Week 6 (1-0) E-dub Vs (1-0) Eck-lipse

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VERSES DUE BY FRIDAY, TRY AND GET THEM UP BY WEDNESDAY IF YOU CAN.


30 LINE MAX


VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR 3 VOTES DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE..


MAKE THIS HOT!!
 
Old 07-08-02, 02:00 AM   #2
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checkin in
 
Old 07-08-02, 04:17 PM   #3
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i'm tired of waiting for you to check in....
i'mma drop right now, and cuz aint doing shyt...


(here we go-again)

65% of me


eck=lipse, prepare to be on crutches...
as i spit week 6 top 15 punches/

check-it

no need to holla-back, cuz im da cancer on da track..
15-hard hittin punches to ur skull, leavin' ur cranuim
cracked..i dare u to re-act/
and watch me rip u for ur pride, like goku did to vegeta..
picture bullets as liquid..i splash ur ass with a 2-liter..
commin in dis battle with no heater..already proved i
beat'cha..but u just cant get enuff of dem long hard bars
like OZ in-mate "Bleecher"/(Gay)
nicca gone need asprin when i finish rippin in him like
dis is da main-event..throwin blows to ur chest leaving'u oxygen-less..by da 10th bar, i wouldnt be surpise if da
mods have to end dis..for future problems, cuz my text
really prevent shyt/
u left CIA cuz i wuz gettin all da attention.. while i wuz mc rippin..u wuz gettin beat,hung and veteran style lynchin..nicca,we wuz eating da beef while u wuz cleaning da kitchen..now all of a sudden you dat nicca with dat hot
flow spittin/(yeah right)
and u wuz so anxious waiting for dub to be a free-agent..
thinkin.. i'mma help u on dem niccaz who be eck-lipse hating.. nawh dawg on dat kind of event, i cant be participating/
cuz real recongnize realness..but even thou u fake-ish
i got'u feelin it..and da funny thang about it, its u
who i'm rippin in/(damn)
leaving ur gutz 2-inches away from ur nutz..with ur
dick shoved up ur butt..dis nicca aint got shyt locked
so he must be a mutt/(get-it)
i leave'ya frame like a used tampax, all bloody..
and i mangle ur facial appearance all luvly..
ko images pops up, hhhhhmmmmmm, must be/
punches got ur melon swelling..da only way u
win is buddy votez e-mailing..my lyrical content got
u jailed-in/
so i expect a-no-show from my opponentakacontender..
da results: da coward wuz to pussifie to enter/
so i took my actions upon his click dat he be claiming..
my heavy-weight material got'cha crew strugglin and straining..da out come is murdah when i brang da pain-in
dat will leave'ya skin pale and ur flesh liquid draining/
my 350 mag, will squeeze ur head harder den a tight du-rag, u fag..so call rb investigators to put ur re-mains in a food-lion grocery bag/
ecks be da well-known prick..surrounded by cocks, more den elton john around dicks, making xxx gay flicks..i spit sick/
so take my flue as i leave ur skin iced-pale blue..
my vocab and disses is like jada kiss spittin somethin new..i leave'ya six=pack on ice as if ur chest wuz brew/
making ur body decay like dead missin people from society..
u probally da only 1 who cried off part 2 of da lion king...i just been crowned da top lyrcisist so bow-down and kiss da ring..or i'mma have to give'ya pain like a 1000 beez ready to sting/
so be like kiss and just knock ur self out..as i succeed to da next level waiting for rep to put me up against da HC title bout/

and i'm out
 
Old 07-08-02, 10:43 PM   #4
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thanks for the wack verse; now there's no need for a back-search...you shoulda battled your own mirror to see who can rap worse.../ i'll gut you quick, find your crew & i'll call your mans' bluff...you throw punches worse than Stevie Wonder in handcuffs.../ your text's weak, you net geek flexin a pocket protector...if you were any more PUSSY, i'd mistake your ass for CARMEN ELECTRA!!/ i read your verse & laughed harder than Eddie Murphy "Delirious"...bitchass, i could slaughter your menstrual flow with a verse full of periods:/..... ...... ....... ... . .... ......... ........./ .... ....... .......... ......... .. ....../ thought i was kidding?? my last 2 empty bars beat your whole spit...you couldn't spit FAWNKY if i forced you to eat your own shit!!/ either you're becoming schizophrenic, or you're getting your dome "split".../ this kid thought he'd step to boost his rep & realized he wasn't worthy...i'm full from Thanksgiving, but there's room to eat another turkey...

*chews this kid up, farts, goes & takes a big nasty shit*

i'm back, what's goin' down son? - apparently your chances!!/ better stick to giving your lap-top nightly lap dances.../ fuck your amateur ad-vances; snap out of your wack trances...you look like Zoolander hitting poses attempting battle stances.../ i shatter masses, you "ain't FLY yet" - i splatter MAGGOTS...i just KRUSHed, KILLed, & DESTROYed, this alias faggot.../ the only way you'll "come close" is if we're mentioned in the same line:


aiight, VOTES!!!!!!
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Old 07-08-02, 11:50 PM   #5
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tight verse, now let da votez roll-in
 
Old 07-09-02, 09:33 AM   #6
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First of all lemme say I feel like I shouldn't even vote this shit is so close, both flows was beautiful, i liked e-dubs wordplay but Eck-Lipse had the btaa punches
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Old 07-09-02, 09:42 AM   #7
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oh shyt dis wus a good battle both rappers came out wit they hardest but i think eclispe came harder x-specially n da beginnin

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thanks for the wack verse; now there's no need for a back-search...you shoulda battled your own mirror to see who can rap worse

vote=Eck-Lipse
 
Old 07-09-02, 12:09 PM   #8
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2-0, tight verse dubz, uppin
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Old 07-09-02, 02:28 PM   #9
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damn this was a good battle

vote=Eck-clipse

his opener was off the hook.

both of them was tight though just to long to read
 
Old 07-09-02, 04:26 PM   #10
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3-0, UPPIN
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Old 07-09-02, 06:30 PM   #11
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damn... um

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picture bullets as liquid..i splash ur ass with a 2-liter..
commin in dis battle with no heater..already proved i
beat'cha..but u just cant get enuff of dem long hard bars
like OZ in-mate "Bleecher"/(Gay)


^^ that's the best line outta e-dub's verse... i thought
e-dub had flow, some good punches, and some nice lines

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i could slaughter your menstrual flow with a verse full of periods:/..... ...... ....... ... . .... ......... ........./ .... ....... .......... ......... .. ....../ thought i was kidding?? my last 2 empty bars beat your whole spit...


that right there... was funny and hit hard, Eck-lipse had flow and harder punches

i thought both MCs here were ill


vote = Eck-lipse


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Old 07-09-02, 06:32 PM   #12
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VOTE ECK-LIPSE

HE CAME WIT HARDER PUNCHES AND E-DUB'S WASN'T MAKIN NE SINCE TO ME

BOTH FLOWED VERY WELL

THA MENSTRUL LINE BY ECKLIPSE WAZ ILL

THA LINE BY E-DUB THAT I LIKED WAZ BOUT DA 2 LITERS

NICE BATTLE GUYZ

HOLLA
 
Old 07-09-02, 06:57 PM   #13
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Great battle, nice verse from but like Lil-Dallas said: E-dub came wit the wordplay but Eck packed some hot punch lines...

E-dub your verse was alright, my fav bars are:

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and watch me rip u for ur pride, like goku did to vegeta..
picture bullets as liquid..i splash ur ass with a 2-liter..


As for Eck-lipse, he tried to end the battle from the start wit these bars:

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now there's no need for a back-search...
you shoulda battled your own mirror to see who can rap worse..


but he later calmed, although at the end he killed it with this bar:

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the only way you'll "come close" is if we're mentioned in the same line


So my vote goes to Eck, because he had 'more' punchlines....although E-dub's verse wasn't bad...1
 
Old 07-09-02, 07:56 PM   #14
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Vote-Eck-Lipse

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Man, both verses were good, but the "periods" line and the operner of Eck's verse put E-Dub away. However, the best punch in this battle was E's punch against himself by whining about newbies the minute the battle started to turn against him, now that's funny shit.
 
Old 07-10-02, 03:55 AM   #15
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Yo ecklipse...FEEL PROUD..??YOU BEAT A NEWBIE...WHO BEAT ME...(wit DICKRYDAZ)....no bitchin.....
WOW...ur up how much..??
COOL...
SO IN week 3...I beat MC Core...a cat from ur crew....5-0...
And my verse was much tighter than wut ur's is here....
mind you so was mc core's.....
then da next week...I Beat Broke Stylez 8-0...for da L.L.B.L MiddleWeight Champion.....
Oh and my nigga Broke Would Murder You.....

Ur in da wrong leauge ecklipse...Ya lips is too big for ya spitz...
I'll put dat to rest...

My Vote=Eck~Lipse.......It's obvious he won......
 
 


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