Aight man theres a minimum of 15 bars and a maximum of 20 the first to 5 otes wins or a 3 and 0 knock out theres a three day post limit and u spit first and i'll post ater that aight ~1~

YO I JUST SAW THIS BUT IMA POST TOMORROW CUZ IM MAD TIRED......SO JUST TAKE THIS AS A CHECK-IN AIGHT...

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aight

dont mean 2 inturupt but can i get a battle next from either of you

yeah u can battle me righ now juss set it up and spit

well actually i m kinda new 2 this ite so were or which forum do i post in

the on your in

i posted it in the VVV ----verbal victms sumthin forum with the ather battles so drop urs there ok


its called STAR -VS- Sunshine

I can't believe this stupid-ass nigga think he can beat me wit his dumb-rhymes//
This fool had a boxin match wit his phone,so he could have punch-lines//
Only time ya punches would hit my head,is if ya slapped box with my dick//
Ya brain must be next to ya wast,cuz this nigga think he hip//
I'll leave so much holes in ya body,niggas will mistake ya for a chainlink fense//
Sunshine musta vomitted monpoloy money,cuz he spits non-cents(sense)//
U put a Jordan B-ball card in wrappin paper and opened it,to show me ya could rip the mike(mic)//
Ya need ta get brain from Michael Jackson,so ya can think bright//
U a (L)oser (O)ften (R)ubbin (D)icks,and that the only time ya called a lord//
Why don't ya surf wit ya twin,so u can get a double-u(w) on the board//
Ya a faggot,Sunshine wanted to give me all of his points for sex//
Seens like ya lost ya ecasty,cuz ya punches just are missin x//
Only time ya have a steel heart,is if bashed ya chest in wit a hammer//
Sun couldn't spit nice bars,even if ya was in a tavern full of peep who taught manners//
Ya remined me Mike Tyson givin head,....ya punches is just suckin//
Like tryin ta build a new set of twin towers,ya raps need constrution//

WAITIN ON YA VERSE........

Un expected u couldn’t be tight even if you were a virgin// and you couldn’t blow up if u were a afghani in a turbine// your flow reminds me of richard simmons, because its just disturbine// and a judge wouldn’t give your flow a ten even if u served him// Un thinks hes iced out buyin jewelry out the source// playin with light sabers thinkin he feels the force// this nigga jacked my dick just to say that he beat me// he said he’d make me pay the price so he receipted me//this nigga gives rim jobs just to say he had twenty inch rims// and makes boots out of trees to rock timberlands// I determined this niggas gay like pee wee herman// he couldn’t be straight even if he had a perm in//this niggas think hes phat cuz he looks like sherman(sherman klump )//this nigga burned his self to say he was hot like fire//and went to newyork to say he had a empire (empire state building)//this bitch is juss speakin ,he knows I’ll cut him up like michael myers// tie his ass up and hang him up by street wires//call the fire department because by now theres a UNEXPECTED fire// and then frame the bitch cuz in his hand is a lighter//and then he can be in jail with hannibal (silence of the lambs) cuz both them bitches is biters

ight im done ~1~

AIGHT COO..BOTH VERSES IN NOW WE UPPING FOR VOTES..

AND DROP A VOTE IN MY BATTLE VS VAST

aight ~1~

VOTE= UN-EXPECTED

HIS FLOW WAS MORE SMOOTH AND WELL STRUCTURED & GENERALLY HAD BETTER, HARDER HITTING PUNCHES & VOCAB. SUNSHINES WASN'T WHACK, HE JUST SEEMED CHOPPY AND COULDN'T REALLY HOLD MY INTEREST. HE NEEDS TA SMOOTH IT OUT A LITTLE BIT MORE & COME WITH HARDER HITTING PUNCHES. GOOD SHIT THOUGH TA BOTH OF U.

PLS VOTE ON L.O.C VS CAMARAC

1-0 ME STILL UPPIN

Vote=Un-Expected
Un....
had good word play.I liked it overall but you should have used more multies.You tight though

Sunny Boy....
Well I guess I saw more of ya talent here.Urs was tight to just felt his wordplay more.


Both---I think they were both a lil bit too long