stayed home from skool today. got bored of playin' ps2 so i decided to record a lil freeverse. i put it up to a beat that sounds like a circus theme. it could be put into a nice lil ditty if n e one wantz to put down a verse with me. i'm just too lazy nowadays to fill 3 verses. the quality sounds kinda pootie to me on my lo fi. so i would recomend hi fo or download. its aight so peep it up!!!! thanks, ill feed back to those feedbackerz. get at me.

circus jawnz

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i stayed home too. but i wasnt really feelin this. but hey its a freestyle. keep it up fam. you'll get there

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thanks for tha support kontro, hey, maybe you can teach me how to be ILL like you one day.

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that was funny.... now to feedback...
Your quality is pretty shitty, lots of pops and stuff, but thats cool could have been alot worse... ur rhymes were on point for the most part, im sayin its real quick and its a free... so lyrics are nothing from the amazing tip but I thought you flowd better than anything I've heard from Kontroverzey so far... Sounds like you feel comfortable on a microphone, decent prescence you had a little emotion in it.... just keep droppin and workin on it... you as nice as anyone on here so fuck kids sayin otherwise... 1

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word to pippen. Flow. is only thing i need to work on. i gotz emotion tough. but Lyrics is a big Thing on a track freestyle or not.. A HOT freestyle would have to be hot lyrics but this was koo. keep elevating.

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yes, word to pippen. lol how about some more feed?

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This freestyle was good for what it was, a freestyle, i give props to kids who can come off the dome with some dope shit,your quality needs work,but your mic presence is good,and you showed emotion,you werent flat or monotone sounding or boring, keep it up man, i was feelin this............1

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uppin for more feed.

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