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Old 11-29-04, 02:12 PM   #1
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....was bored

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Spit Perfectionate With Lyrics, Plus I'm Affectionate
Doper Than The Syringe That You Use To Inject It With
I Hustle Any Thing From Thoughts To Motives
Persuade You To Think Somethins Obtainable When It's Only A Dream...Stolen
Not Bought I got An Old one It's Cocked that grabbed the attention of and old guy...Give me ya money or lose ya pride he had enough money I thought I would lose my eyes..

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I don't mean to be mean but I ain't no gentlewoman
I'll rearrange ya teeth to where you need a dental plan
I been on this team since my seed was made a plant
Shootin beams at enemies that wanna sneak and shake my hand

Always creasin somethin up, So I know where the iron is
Niggas was Hard, but now they soft like Irisis
Talkin about ya six pack, I got the gift of gab, quick to blow a blunt stunt with a pump so you can't find ya ribs

My level is high because I set my own standards
Tired of tellin young bucks to mind their own manners
especially when a mans present
A real woman'll tell you the best present comes with a mans presence(lol)

Not from the past nor future, but here in the present
Not here to confuse or ask all kinds of questions
Taking it one day at a time, countin all of my blessings
And makin sure that I learn all of my lessons

some say they don't like my attitude
Well they ain't half the gal I am
laughin as my strap unsnaps when I come unglued
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Old 11-29-04, 04:23 PM   #2
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dope drop yo.....if dats yo shit when ur bored, like 2 c a full piece from u get me, 7.5/10 --- nice structure, good flow, -------1st verse strucure off a bit and rhmin off but sill aight...overall tight drop...return tha favour wit an honest vot or sum feedbak on ma poem...Peace
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Old 11-30-04, 10:21 AM   #3
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iight will do....thanx 4 da feed....uppin
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Old 11-30-04, 10:52 AM   #4
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good Lord find this girl somethin' to do!

good drop baby girl.i was into it the whole piece straight thru.
I'm a fan of ur's if you didn't notice.keep em comin'.9/10 on this.
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Old 11-30-04, 11:05 AM   #5
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lol havent noticed...newayz thanx 4 da feed luv...hey a ladie can get bored once in a while hehe...uppin
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