i lace tracks with anthrax to break and blow backs/
run-raps that hijack your fans with single foot taps/
unconquerable, however improbable/
check your attackers, its more than just haters knocking-you/
representing L.I. the most Lyically Intelligent/
since Lincoln speech-writers, the ghost of dead presidents/
its evident, half of these kids need ghostwriters for keystyles/
half of them thats left barely talking like old men thats senile/
of the last quarter, 3 out of 4 got brains thats out of order/
9 out of 10 thats left are just pigs to the slaughter/
its a 1 in a million biz, dont get your hopes up kids/
when you hop on this rap-starship, dont expect to seize the bridge/
mediocraty only sells when you connected well/
to a producer with no self-respect, who'll burn in rap-hell/
expect a fire-laced cell, when the signal from the bell/
signals your 15 minutes gone, prepare in satan's kitchen dwell/

Not bad son, I look at this like a reg freestyle, not bad from the top, just elevate your vocabulry and your deliveru overall, peace.

ey this is nice. on point topic flow tight and the vocab fits. my sorta shit this. Johnny u from merseyside? im birkenhead. gotta do sum collab sum time lad. aight check any o mine out they on the first 2 pages. aight chill

nice dog

Damn there 'nuff UK heads repping here... Aight this was a nice piece, the rhythm was on point and it kept consistent, a nice use of multies... Some internals woulda smoothed everything else up, but ya looked at the syllables and the end product was good... The wordplay was iLL, some of it was funny, it caught my eye with the knowledge dropped, some powerful lines... The vocab coulda been improved, more knowledge terms and this woulda been straight... Werent feeling the concept though, I think you could spit with some actual depth if ya put your mind to it, drop some substance here, mos def a good read though, keep em coming... Keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...

from north south sides of the MERSEY we got 2 heads reppin on rb for the UK baby . lol

that took 15 mins?

^^if typing could have tones i wouldnt like the tone of that reply^^

if you arent making with the feedback then dont reply to the post, you dumb-ass.

and i dont know EXACTLY how long it took, i dont keep a fuckin stopwatch on me when i'm keystyling, kay? it was ABOUT 15 minutes in my own estimation.

all the other kats, cheers for the replies and the recognition.
pzz.

hahahaha, yeah damn...

this was tight, had some good rhymes and nice scheme, aiight for any"time" freestyle whatever ish it takes to get done, don't matter, peace dawg


signed,
~madd