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11-30-04, 11:31 PM
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Couldn't Cope... Ft. Two By Four...
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Chorus… -Anxiety In the beginning, you were everything I wished for… But you wanted it all, you were always tryna get more… A sick whore, my pain is all you were thirsty for… And even though it’s over, your still tryna hurt me more… -Anxiety I remember when I was near you I was shy to you… You used to tell me fucked up shit like I should find a clue… It didn’t stop me though I continued to pursue… I remember I made a promise never to hurt you… But I don’t recall those words coming out your mouth… Now that I think about it you just wanted out ya house… But back then I was clueless about what we had… The first time that we argued it was roughly bad… I tried to fix things while you kept things bottled up inside… But that night when you called, you broke down and cried… I felt bad, though I wasn’t gonna apologize… At least that’s what I thought until I saw your eyes… As I recall after that we tried to take things slow… You wouldn’t touch me let alone try make me blow… But it was cool with me because I had a patient mind… I thought it just needed to be the right place and time… But that wasn’t the reason, you started to avoid… Every time I called like I was trying to annoy… When I actually got a hold you said I was getting weird… When I tried to apologize that’s when you disappeared… You went on vacation and didn’t call me at all… I knew deep down that it was probably to stall… Then when you got back I heard that phone ring… But by this time I was glad I wasn’t even hoping… That you wanted to keep going, it needed to end… And I really hope that you don’t want me as a friend… I remember when we were close and so much joy was there… Now when I’m walking through the halls I just avoid ya glare… You call now and then, and when I answer you hang up… I know in your heart you wish we could have made up… You tried to get the ship moving again, but realized it wouldn’t float… Cause when it came to you, I realized I couldn’t cope… Chorus… -Anxiety In the beginning, you were everything I wished for… But you wanted it all, you were always tryna get more… A sick whore, my pain is all you were thirsty for… And even though it’s over, your still tryna hurt me more… -Two By Four I don’t understand why you were always a bitch in the first Place We should have took more time, & took this shit at a slower Pace Always walking by showing off I think your stupid if you ask Me Just because we didn’t cope you go & say shit, to people Pivotally But really I couldn’t understand why you acted so preppy Anyway Tell me why you act like that, was it because of what I usually Say Because what I usually say don’t mean anything, its usually a Joke When you always talk you make me choke, but hell im no slow Poke I cant believe I dated a girl with A.D.D problems that go Ludacris Did I ever say I loved you or that I promised, No, sorry little Miss It felt like you were tricking me to thinking you always looked Good If I could take back what I said I wouldn’t, I don’t think I Should To be honest you walk like your retarded, really what are you Doing? Everyday in class you had lots of gum and just wouldn’t stop Chewing How annoying do you get, I bet laughing at you wouldn’t do Anything Stepped into class with a strap of leather on your arm thinking its Bling When I said something not meaning to be rude, you took it to the Heart You gave me this nasty look, for a while after that I was torn Apart Might you have been skilled a bit athletically but didn’t match Me We didn’t cope at anything, & still your skills dropped Automatically Seeing you try to compete with me, truly & honestly I get Embarrassed Instead of trying to compete with me, do something that can be Cherished When we usto date you would flirt with every guy that was Around Your one of the first reason why I was gonna move outta this Town You would go around asking for kisses but I guess I didn’t Care Well personally you never had the looks, so I didn’t care to Share I added it up & who really cares if your better in School then Me Approximately I don’t care anyway cause that’s not what I wanna Be Teachers reading books and teaching other gay shit, what the fuck Nah Seriously tho you read to fast its like you’re a robot, makes me laugh, Ha But I guess we just didn’t really cope to gether in the first place, to Bad You missed out on lots with me, but you were always to much of a Crab Chorus… -Anxiety In the beginning, you were everything I wished for… But you wanted it all, you were always tryna get more… A sick whore, my pain is all you were thirsty for… And even though it’s over, your still tryna hurt me more… |
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11-30-04, 11:40 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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Buck Buck.....D-Tay...Buck!...weerdizzle this dope...
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11-30-04, 11:46 PM
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tight man
2x4 this the best I seen from you...ever 9.8/10 from Anxiety this the 4th best I seen form you..cuz you drop dope alot... 10/10 i like the chorus too..see you can do chorus's Anx... overall 10/10 I'ma beat this werd
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11-30-04, 11:50 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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^i know i got better i knwo that but Anxeity helped with 3 lines
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11-30-04, 11:53 PM
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^ I do still need help at chorus's...
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12-01-04, 12:12 AM
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omg two by four and anixiety asked me to check this and its fucking dope as fuck fo real two by four omg dope your really elevating now dope
my boys coming up.anixity dope good shit poetic form for you both nice shit here the hook was too short though in line structure aint flow with the rest but verse were dope as fuck a 9/10
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12-01-04, 12:21 AM
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mess with me get cooked
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Yea Thats What Iam Talking About..........2by4.........puerified Dopeness
Iam Gonna Beat This Nuff Said And Yall Bettah Look Out Fam..........cause Drastic.........is Getting Heated By These Om'z Nuff Said.........time To Put My Name Where It Belongs In Tha Om Peace
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12-01-04, 12:38 AM
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i had to read this piece twice........anxiety...i had a hard time getting into what you were saying..but as the verse went on..it got enourmously more potent with imagery and emotion....as well as flow...it's like you had a difficult time starting...and than it just started comin....and 2 by 4...as far as I know..this is the first drop i've read from you..but it wasn't what I expected from reading the feedback...i felt you could have done a lot better...lines seemed forced...and a lot of the rhyming words left kind of a dry un-emotional feeling.....however....i did like this piece a lot....and the reason why I'm not saying it was incredible..because I know anxiety is very talented..and i can see you have madd potential...so it's more of a compliment than a diss.much respect to both of you...check the sigg for om's fam
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We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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12-01-04, 12:42 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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^good feedback....weerd
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12-01-04, 06:45 PM
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Yo... Upping....
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12-01-04, 07:13 PM
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IP:
Nice shit man I wouldn't mind doing a collab with you pro's..... And Two By Four I always knew you were dope but damn homie wasn't expecting something this dope. you guys should get an award for this shit. Hey if any of ya'll wanna collab with me holla. I likedd the chorus the most and bof ya'll verses were dope az fuck.
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12-01-04, 07:20 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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well to let you know this shits true...im gonna be dropen audios to when i get the time to do soem stuff liek the christmas hollidays from school ill have like 2 audios a day..weerd...
and thanks legend i respect that alot...thanks to all... |
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12-01-04, 07:22 PM
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IP:
Your very welcome homie and I wanna start audio.
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12-01-04, 07:25 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
ya weerd...yo legend you got msn or aim?
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12-01-04, 07:28 PM
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Back....
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I use the same E-Mail as my sister. Its lymanrules@msn.com
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