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Old 07-08-02, 03:25 PM   #1
Mystery~murdera
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Wooshy vs. Lil D'

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you want me to drop first or you?
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Old 07-08-02, 03:39 PM   #2
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u can go first man
 
Old 07-08-02, 04:28 PM   #3
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nuttin personal

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here we go 10-16 bars,
no crew votes,
no hate votes,
no d/r,
SAY MY NAME ONCE IN FLOW

lil d walks amongst the kids in the park. He hears them sing.

"Liar liar pants on fire" - Title
verse
Or maybe that's just Wooshy on ya pants//
tryin to find out what it is that makes a REAL man//
Here I am KOin yet another whack MC//
I be so far above yo level you can't even see me//
Reachin me for you would be like climbin Mount Everest//
With my lyrical, force-shatterin gravity disruptin yo leverage//
which is built on BITCH rhymes//
niggas like you go WOOSH cuz they got NO spines//
Are you out of ya mind?! to battle me you goin out of yo way//
you took the wrong route, the sign say Real MC's spittin today//
By lil Dallas, out the west, bringin the heat, Yo ass is gettin LIT //
and you must be PISS cuz I see you ain't SHIT//
but a faker, daddy-raper//
MC that may look good in a skirt but definately not on paper//
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Old 07-08-02, 04:34 PM   #4
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aight you up, bring it
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Old 07-08-02, 04:56 PM   #5
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dude lets have a gud no disrespect from this battle man.

u say that im in there pants ye im the 1 whos on fire/
cuz i am lyrically higher/
but im not in there pants im in ya moms/
wen im there she screams o ye u da bomb/
my words are a nuclear misile so dont mad wen ur mind has exploded/
the heat is high & my rhymes flow but shit like this make a gud interlude/
this shit smokes beta than some sticky green/
the time has come to witness the end of this unmean machine/
the joint is rolled the ball is bowled & still u have no style/
the apcolaypse has jus ridden ova ur & u still dont know how 2 work that fone dial/
 
Old 07-08-02, 05:08 PM   #6
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LilDallas

- With my lyrical, force-shatterin gravity disruptin yo leverage//

Nice flow.

- you took the wrong route, the sign say Real MC's spittin today//

Felt that.

- MC that may look good in a skirt but definately not on paper//

You checking him out or something? Hahaha. Just playing.

WOOSHY

- u say that im in there pants ye im the 1 whos on fire/

Nice use of his verse.

Didn't feel much else from WOOSHY. This goes to LilDallas for better punches.
 
Old 07-08-02, 05:16 PM   #7
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AIGHT BATTLE IMA GIVE THIS SHIT TA LILDALLAS

and you must be PISS cuz I see you ain't SHIT//

THAT LINE MADE ME CHUCKLE A LIL

you took the wrong route, the sign say Real MC's spittin today//

LOL FELT THAT LINE...

WOOSHY
u say that im in there pants ye im the 1 whos on fire/

THATS THE ONLY LINE I LIKED FROM YA WHOLE VERSE....

LILD GOT THIS BATTLE CUZ OF BETTER PUNCHES AND AN OVERALL BETTER VERSE..

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Old 07-08-02, 05:29 PM   #8
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Lil D


"Liar liar pants on fire"

Or maybe that's just Wooshy on ya pants//
tryin to find out what it is that makes a REAL man//

that shit wus funny


Are you out of ya mind?! to battle me you goin out of yo way//
you took the wrong route, the sign say Real MC's spittin today//

that wus the knock out blow

Wooshy

but im not in there pants im in ya moms/
wen im there she screams o ye u da bomb/

pretty funny

my words are a nuclear misile so dont mad wen ur mind has exploded/
the heat is high & my rhymes flow but shit like this make a gud interlude/

could have been tight but u need to work on your delivery

my vote:
Lil' D
 
Old 07-08-02, 05:47 PM   #9
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Not a bad battle...

Little D...
and you must be PISS cuz I see you ain't SHIT
lol

Reachin me for you would be like climbin Mount Everest//
With my lyrical, force-shatterin gravity disruptin yo leverage
Your best couplet.

Overall, not a bad verse, some solid punches mixed in with decent filler.

Woosh...

I honestly didn't feel much of this. It's probably just 'cause I'm from a different board and haven't adapted to the style yet.

but im not in there pants im in ya moms/
wen im there she screams o ye u da bomb
This was your best section. It fed well off of the verse of Little Dallas.

Vote: Little Dallas for a more consistant verse.

Peace
 
Old 07-08-02, 05:51 PM   #10
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Vote=Lil Dallas

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Nothnig here impressed me...both verse sucked...Lil Dallas had no hard lines....his punches were whack and there was mostly filler in your verse...your verse was incredibly elementary and simplke...it was horrible but good enough to beat wooshys post of garbage...Wooshy just wasted space with his verse...it was elementary as fuck....you sound like some three year old on the playground saying garbage ass rhymes...interlude and exploded dont rhyme you idiot...both of you guys plain suck..I dont need to say anymore...

Lil Dallasdidnt do better than wooshy...he just sucked less...

Vote=Lil D
 
Old 07-08-02, 08:41 PM   #11
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DAMN KO to the hospital, (5-0)
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