A comical little intro to my style...

Sittin' in math class, I've got a pen tucked in my ear
I've got my homework done, and so I've got nothin' to fear
I have more than common sense always raise my hand up
The Zach Morris confidence, but the Screech hair cut
Bored enough to doze off, then what did my eyes catch?
The hottest girl in my class walking straight by my desk
Curves like an hour glass, and a face like art work
Then that girl winked at me and it made my heart jerk
She inspired frustrations that I was itchin' to vent
And down below my desk I was pitchin' a tent
After class, the same chick called me over in the hallway
She was taking her time, but I would have waited all day
Then she said "I need some help; You're the one I hoped I'd find...
Help me study for the test tomorrow, that would just blow my mind"
I went to her house that night; surprised she even knew my name
She said "If you share your brain with me, I'll be sure to do the same"
We didn't get ten minutes of study done befor she came over and sat on me
She ditched the alge-bra and then went straight for my anatomy
Well that is my story, but what's the damn lesson?
Study hard; you might get to enjoy a "cram session."

Hope you enjoyed. I'd appreciate feedback.

Peace

Ummm...Up for a reply.

Peace

Ayo, are you THE MC4Eyes? The one from MM?
Its me. Camarac, i guess you saw my link to here, huh?
I saw Intrin Sic on earlier but PM's been disabled so i couldnt talk to him.Anyways, nice piece dogg, i like the saved by the bell part with the screech haircut!!!Nice piece, good to see you on here, its a lot more active than MM but its layout isnt as good here, dont you think?
Anyways, welcome to RB, stay active and show these punks how good you are, you are still gonna be in the MM battle thing though arent you? I want a battle with you and im near the top of the league now, well, i will be if i beat Intrin!!!
Nice piece though kid, holla back!!!!!one...

the beggining sucked like....Sittin' in math class, I've got a pen tucked in my ear
I've got my homework done, and so I've got nothin' to fear


simple as shit and simplae as shit yeah that sums it up i thought u sucked at first then it got better but it was still like a 6 on a scale of 1 to 6000 so id quit now or atleast bite some one elses rymes so u dont look so bad

Camarac....
Yeah, it's me. I'll be down for a battle, but not yet. Let me get used to the site first, then we'll battle.

Lil Nice...
I appreciate your reading the piece, but I think that you might have underestimated my abilities based on my name or the name of the piece. In any case, I don't agree with your suggestion that I should quit or bite. Thanks anyway.

Peace

yeah that was aight, kindof on the Young MC tip ... the last line was jammed in though, sounds like you need to trim it down a few sylabbles yo.

I reworked the last bar a little bit. Thanks for all the feedback.

Peace

this was aiight, had rhymes, you should even your bars out, peeps like what's his name ain't shit to kids starting off, unless they got hidden beef... this was tight with the subject, props, peace 'n' keep spitting


signed,
~madd

this was dope. funny as hell. and ya flowed it good. like the concept and how ya pulled it off with imagery. stay up. peace.
joey