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Ehh.....I didn't like when the first guy came in....seemed too early to me. He flowed nicely though. Same thing with the second guy. He had a really bad sssssssss too. Kinda mumbled through a few lines......like I do Didn't really like his flow at all. Deadly kinda had the ssssss too. Flow was nice. I didn't really like how you kept on cutting in though.......just spit it straight through

Overall, it was a nice track. Keep on elevating....

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THought id peep somethin from some1 im familiar with..

i fuckin hate this beat lol

first cat got a coo voice... i just dont get with this type of shit... hes not bad tho.. jus not my type of thing..
second... awful awful quality.... sounds like this cat i used to know Rezin... like he got a lisp or somethin.. flow is kinna off ....its iight
third...u got a lot of energy.... u punch in a lot tho dont u ??? makes it sound un natural... like i cant fully vibe with it cuz of that shit.. but its decent i suppose

Clearly a fuck around track.. some throw away mess around shit... so it wass iight for what it was

1st Up-Definetely came too early. Im not a fan of that kind of style, but it got better. The beat was kinda too quite compared to the voices. But an alright verse.

2nd Up- Better, I liked it better than the first. Stumbled a couple times, but no biggy. Flow was all over the place.

3rd Up- The strongest verse it seemed of the whole track. Alright, not anything special.

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Word..

Thnx on the feed

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Overall not a bad track. 3rd guy game the hardest, 1st guy wasn't bad lyrics kinda reminded me of like some wutang/jedi mind shit, 2nd guy came aiight but the quality killed his verse.


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