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Old 12-03-04, 05:33 PM   #1
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Baby girl allready know wha she Bout ..Kno where and when her Man Be
Kno 2 come in the Crib allready Decked out in the Vicki T shirt and Panties
Its more pleasure if it comes out Perfectly from the Heart
Love cant Last if you Never give it a Single Chance 2 Start
Now i kno wha pac was talkin bout when he said Relocateing 2 a Thug Mansion
Watchin Sunsets.. that Best Sex thats Unforget smokein and Sippin Thug Passion
Where Eva baby doll wanna Relocate..She kno ima Be ready 2 Co Sign my Time
She support me thru all My issues...Shit i love u Beyond ya status of bein a Dime
Baby dont let tha Status of our age come inbetween our Emotinal Settings
Unbelievable Pleasure when we together...Cant wait until the Promotinal Wedding
She understands tha Grind..baby manage 4 Kids...My Time..Ironing and Stayin Fine
She allready knew wha 2 Exspect from the Jumpoff.When i gave her my 1st Line
Thats why where ever i decide 2 Relocate 2 my Boo gone be Thru it wit Me
Shit its Obvious this Love Uncontested Like the Old Bobby and Whitney
K-I-SS Me is wha she Pleads the Moment i step out tha S-U-V
Let it be Known we Freaks...But Me's dont Associate wit S-T-D's
U held me down thru every damn Near thang i was Going Thru
Cuz i kno this is Undeniable that we gone be Here when time is Thru
U kno im from the Street...so its a Prospect 4 me 2 keep it Gully
Not only is she a lover..Mother..friend...she even hold me like a Buddie
Shortie a Nymphomanic so Exspectedly we Exchange thru 4 Beds
But i end it off every Night..under the Shower Kissin Drops off her 4 head
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Old 12-04-04, 12:48 AM   #2
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Didnt liek it much. Didn't seem like a very poetic drop. Anyway it was creative enough, and the wording was decent. All around ok job. Keep at it.
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Old 12-04-04, 03:47 PM   #3
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this is more of an open mic ne way
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Old 12-08-04, 03:37 AM   #4
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Uppin 4 the people
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