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Check in by: 12-10-04 at 09:28 PM

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H-N-I-C has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-07-04 11:05 PM.

A.K.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 04:30 PM.

yo i'll spit tomorrow cause then i'll actually be home long enough to spit

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i'll but you head on the death bed cause you ain't gonna have a body left
when you start fucking wit me your chin is gonna have more then a cleft
you trying to stop me? could happen even if you cut off my mic cord
i'll punch ya and leave ya wit 26 teeth like letters on a keyboard
putting bullets in you i'ma leave you double stuffed like oreos
let the five fingers meat the face see i don't give a fuck about you or ya hoes
your name might be hnic but you ain't gonna be no prodigy
your mob roll only one deep you ain't a fucking o g
get you ready for the holidays and hang your ass like a stocking
it's my catz at the door it's not oppertunity knocking

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your turn dude show me what you got and don't run.

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come on i don't wanna win by dq so come on and spit

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A.K.A ya "bitch made" as if a "dog assembled you"
I murder you, leave a "Clue" now we got niggaz "Guessin Who"

"Was it Kernal Mustard wit the fuckin monkey wrench"
No my "down pour" of lyrics that left this fuckin monkey "drenched"

You a true "Young Buck" look at the way I'm "sonnin you"
I ought to be ya fuckin "father" how I'm "takin you to school"

Ayo I'm makin my debut I'm kinda new to this "shit"
So I'mma ease my way in and start off wit a "piss"

Right on this bitch...Like he was made of "porcelain"
I torture him like "Eminem" would love to do that bitch "Kim"

Slim trim and in tha gym, is why my punches "hittin hard"
Like a soldier in a palace nigga stay on ya "guard"

Slip up you gettin "stomped" like a roach in the hood
And you'd think he was a fag the way he "takin the wood"

I'm murkin the kid...like the otha 15 did
All this "Talent Dan" had it must still be "hid"

It's "D-day" for tha "Killah" and it's just "2bad"
"Banned cuz you too good" no u "banned cuz you trash"

this was a good battle i kinda felt it was more of an a.k.a win but this is just feedback

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ok nice lets get some votes.... thanks for the feed back yo

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Uppin this shit...................................

uppin 4 votes.....................................

uppin................ you wat does your letters stand for?

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Uppin.........................Basically for Head Nigga In Charge, but that's not usually what I go by, I came on here about a month ago, and got ripped up once or twice, and I got a chance to see what text battlin was like, so I got a this alias, and came back on. I definitely elevated.

Voted For: H-N-I-C

HNIC definately took this one... Definately had better vocab, structure, and flows... I Liked the Banned cuz you too good no u banned cuz u trash line.... His rhymes were definately better as well... So HNIC won this one in my opinion...
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