This is sumthin i wrote for this gurl in tha 8th grade, this is my first and i hope not my last poem im postin in herr so be honest kause therr's always room 4 improvement

"That Gurl"
By: Geoffrey Meade

When she smiles without a doubt,
It`s harder to tell her what i`m about
Like when the wind blows
And it`s just a gentle breeze
I feel as if i can’t let her go
I don’t beg with a "baby please"
I hope it`s not LOVE
That`ll only push her away
But damn she is beautiful like a dove
I don’t care if it’ll be just 1 day
I would try to please her in every way
But i hope i don’t do too much
I’m a nervous wreck, did i throw up my lunch?
I just wanna impress her
I have love 4 her a whole bunch
Like how monkeys love bananas
Hold up! Am i still in my pajamas!?
Man i`m nervous as hell
My heart is beating like a cowbell
Why can’t i tell her how i feel?
I’ll try...but nothing! What’s the deal?
I...i`ll stutter when i try to speak
And when she replies, i can’t think!
My legs get weak...
My posture is getting...neat?
My heart starts to beat, fast!!!
My body gets heavy...
Palms start sweating...
And damn, what was i gonna say?
...I guess tomorrow is another day

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Eazy Duz It Bitch...or get Popped

This poem had excellent imagery... had sum nice content, seemed simple at first but it turned out well................ i wasn't feeling teh line about the pajamas much... but overall not bad at all...

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thanx, i was in the 8th grade, and that was when evry1 wore pajama pants wit sum Jordans or Air Foces, basically a lil trend, but yea. Good looking ma much luv

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Eazy Duz It Bitch...or get Popped

nice poem man nice imagry and......it was short and sweet......keep it up......i hope to see more fam.........
also post the link in our link thread for our crew so our crew will see it........
return the feed on my poem......
links in sig
peace~1

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Eazy Duz It Bitch...or get Popped

yeeahhh...i thought it was dope...um work on...nothing..just keep dropping them aiight fam...plus that was in the 8th grade so im sure you can drop something better...im lookin forward to our collab wit Franklin...pz..

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hey my nigg u know who thiz stoner be nice work imagery nice

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yeah...dis is iight my nig...im feelin it...case closed

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Eazy Duz It Bitch...or get Popped

Man That Poem Is Dope But Im Not Puttin It Down Or Nuthin But It Almost Seems Like A Play.........anyway Keep It Up Man Its Cool

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josh