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12-10-04, 02:41 PM
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"Whatchu want from me"
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Peep the latest drop called "whatchu want from me" just a quik track for yall to get back in the swing of things reconizeWhatchuWantFromME SELF SOUNDCLIK THE SVENTHIRD AND TONYSELF audio PAGE BOTTOM OF MY SIG
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12-10-04, 03:03 PM
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Welcome back Tony, nice opener in this track, i like the beat, haha, your flow is on point, nice voice and emotion in this as well, i think your vocals could be turned up a bit, but this was dope, like the little hook too, nice job, keep it up man.....1
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12-10-04, 05:23 PM
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IP:
this was aight could be better lyrics but good flow and emotions in it nice shit overall check mine on soundclick out
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12-10-04, 11:15 PM
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Beat's pretty emotional. Sounds like you may be usin too many multis cuz I can't understand much of your flow. You got a unique flow though. Second guy is tight, flow fell off a bit at one part. Chorus is kinda bland. Hard to get into, it was ok, keep workin, peace.
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12-11-04, 12:16 AM
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Listening...very nice beat...
Yeah, flow is fuckin good...lyrics are dope...multies are nice, and the flow IS understandable...voice qualtiy could be a lil better but overall this is a fuckin dope track... Hit this up...thanks. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165317 |
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12-11-04, 12:17 AM
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IP:
Turn up the vocals tony.....let us hear you man!!!!!
lol.....anyway, it soundedl ike the beat was just a tad too slow for you....would probably sound better to a faster beat. Anyway, welcome back and be on the lookout for some serious constructive criticism....I'm known to give it straight, so don't take it to heart 
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12-11-04, 10:12 AM
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i agree with that lil on the slow side of thangs and yesss my mic vol. needs a boost holla aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa good lookin out yall
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12-11-04, 10:48 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
vol needs higher hook is good lol feelin tha red sox verse
nice quick drop man glad to see you back.... |
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12-12-04, 06:51 PM
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uppin this shizznit bizzitches
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