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12-11-04, 01:54 PM
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Open Mic
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My Raps Leave-Bones-Crushed You Need.To.Think Sit On The Toilet And See If Your Ideas -Dont-Get-Flushed/
Your Death-Is-Sudden I Got Ya Blood Pumping.It.Up Like Were Going To A Concert To See-Joe-Budden/ Your Life-Dont-Matter Another.Confession.Video But Its Your Heart-That-Shatters/ Like Car Gears Im Shifting-Your-Bladder You'll.Never.Reach.The.Top Like-Mini-Ladders/ Ya Brain Cant-React-To-This-Speech Im.The.Black.Pope My Rhymes Ready-To-Preach/ It Aint Awkard That-I-Come-Ill Givin You.A.Nipple.Twister Now Aint That A- I Was bored like a mother...
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12-11-04, 02:47 PM
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lmao this was kinda funny dont get me wrong it was good but the nipple twister line just killed it lmao fuuny shit.... the wordplay and flow was pretty damn sick man keep dropping Open mics like this and i will critique them just work on your strcutre try to make the lines around the same length
overall : 8.5/10 can you drop some feedback in my open mic in my sig thanks man
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12-11-04, 08:16 PM
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IP:
ight i will thanks
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12-12-04, 08:06 AM
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uppin...............
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12-12-04, 05:57 PM
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Uppin................
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12-12-04, 06:55 PM
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upp9n.............
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