While my crew be fillin cats with holes, I fill sacks with dough, I fill trucks with hoes, fill ya crews with moles/
I can do anything with a small amount of cash, and I'm on my greatest high when I get a large amout of ass/

...style switch...

When I'm done they'll be screamin, OnSlaught's Bizzak, with hollow tip bullets and gats, Don't need to guess cause you know where I'm at/

...switch back...

These little bitches wanna test me, wanna best me, they don't impress me, until they hard press me, my vest be, on my body till my gun is empty/
Only on my 3rd bar and this shyt gets worse, still on my first verse, and police callin the herse/
Cause there wont be much of a body, left for autopsy, when I come through with the cannon-shotty/
My thugs smoke cowards, and kill blunts, and rock bandanas but not fronts,look at women and see nothing but cunts, pull stunts on police blocks, and murder runts/
I'm like Prima Maximus, or the First Navajoe, cause I use midievil weapons when I go out and strike a ho, for the record, strike ya flow, I'll strike a blow, and rob peeps even if I know, that they papers low/
My thugs roll with a fifth and a half, my crew's like a corporation with like millions of staff, and anything I say can happen, I'm like god speakin wrath, you can die a man or a coward,You can choose your path/
I'm not an Eminem wanna be, in fact I hate the whore, I'd go armed for war, show me the trailor door, and I'd lace the floor, with a dark red luquid, and take Haille on tour/
I'm the rap veteran, nobodies betterin, even if they used fancy font and letterin, I'm better than, any member of any clan you in, kill you with any beat even if I used a Mandolin...

Quick freestyle

Awe come on, don't sleep

nice drop yo!

When I'm done they'll be screamin, OnSlaught's Bizzak, with hollow tip bullets and gats, Don't need to guess cause you know where I'm at/


^^^ i like that

keep droppin yo


check my peice out yo!

nice and good battle...........

it's aiight..

It was iight...U lost me at most points...Up vocab...Maybe it would sound better in a audio...Elevate

THIS WAS AIGHT SEAMS SOMETHING WAS LACKING

DAMN, IT FEELS GOOD TO BE A TRENDSETTA...NICE DROP...LOVE THE STYLE SWITCHIN

I aint feeling the whole gangsta ish of this, the concept was aight, good battle sense but it didnt really have a lot of depth, it was a bling bling rhyme... The flow was aight, there were some multies, it did come choppy in places but it werent bad, more multies were needed... You need to incorporate more wordplay into your verses, and up the vocab slightly, aint a bad piece, you have got elevating to do... Keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...

nice piece man.. I thought it was pretty good even though I usually dont enjoy bling blingin flows.. you had good style.. and I liked the style switches... Keep elevatin... 1...

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